Do Friends Mix As Lovers

Side by side we lay,
She breathes shallowly 
and I feel her chest rise
slowly, gently against my body
her breasts press against my side
And I quiver, electricity shoots through my nerves
quickening my heart and melting me into warmth
i watch her peaceful in her sleep
at rest, safe and unflinching beside me
I touch her silken hair, so soft
she is the image of beauty
An angel without mercy
Flawless creature - lips calling quietly
To be captured and enthralled
I am a prisoner of her spell 
I brush her skin with my fingertips
It is so hard not to touch her
But I keep my hands back
refraining from roaming where they long to go
drawing circles down her belly and lips
aching to kiss every line of her skin
her breasts warm beneath my hands
squeezed and nipples flicked 
and then brought against hungry lips
Where I would suck on them, 
softly and then harder until she were squirming 
whimpering as Id drag my lips down her body 
over every curve licking the honey from her skin
Until reaching that luscious spot between her thighs
and gently spreading her to her surprise
my tongue dancing a million ways
diving deep to surface quickly for air
and dive down, down into her taste
kissing her thighs and nibbling her softness
and the taste of her skin makes me high 
I do everything not to let myself get carried away
And yet watching her sleep is sexy to me
I lie beside her, wet and warm
aching to touch her, aching down below
where I want her to touch me
And make love with her for the first time
I'm squirming more every second I look at her
The need to love her ever growing
The need to leave and step away from this insanity
And yet I already know I wont leave her side 
I'd suffer for eternity if it meant keeping this right

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/1/2014 1:21:00 PM
What a discriptively stimulating write! If this was a movie, it most likely would be rated "R".
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Date: 1/24/2014 4:05:00 PM
What a great poem. Its nice reading your piece once again. Keep on writing please.
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Date: 1/24/2014 12:45:00 PM
This is beautiful.. I remember many times feeling the same way. How I long for those days..This piece is very nicely expressed......Tim
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Date: 1/20/2014 8:22:00 PM
I agree with Justin's statement: WOW! I can feel those intense emotions, amazingly expressed. Your poetry is intense. I really like that. Always, Laura
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Date: 1/16/2014 1:41:00 PM
I ache with silent WOW! 'Its so hard not to touch her...' Reckless poise for eternity. A sad, but happy prisoner. Bravo for the masterpiece that is you. J.A.B.
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Date: 1/16/2014 12:31:00 PM
fantastic!! ..very disturbing.. :)) can't help not be moved with your poem,Jay.. very effective!!! ^__6
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/16/2014 1:30:00 PM
one of poet here comment to mine like this way..i got confused too..he he..
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Jay Loveless
Date: 1/16/2014 12:41:00 PM
Disturbing?
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