Pang Xiong Poet Free verse

Do Da Dishes Yo

inspired by some poem that's 100x better than this one l0l

water water everywhere
and all the dishes in the sink
standing in my underwear
unsure what to think

why am I doing this?
in the sink that is full of grime
why am I forced against my wishes?
surely this must be a crime

water water everywhere
why, water is flowing on the floor
the dishes are done, over there
but this is your problem, I'm out the door

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Beata Agustin June 21, 2024 at 11:51 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A February 15, 2016 at 12:07 PM well expressed

Skat A November 15, 2015 at 10:34 PM Pang, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**

Kathryn Collins April 14, 2013 at 8:52 AM Dear Pang You are funny. I was just scanning poems from China and yours has put a big smile on my face. Thank you. Kathy

Nadia Shahwan April 7, 2012 at 1:11 PM Pretty poem. I enjoyed reading it. May I give a constructive advise? Pls add more passion to your rich poetry though you expressed your forced passion to clean up the sink; but every successful poet/author/anybody must have stepped on the first step near the sink for survival until an honorable title is given as a vice or a general. All the best. Keep writing.