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I want to explain How I feel about you The thoughts in my head How my heart feels too Your mom and I joined And you were already here I came onto the scene A little late, I fear Just four months old When we first met "Who's this stranger?" You were thinking, I bet You woke up crying And your mom was impressed For I put you to sleep Up against my chest I fell in love with you And took your mom as my wife I remember those years As the best in my life Boy, was I jealous When you met your "real" dad I wanted to grab him And yell at him so bad :) We are married no more Your mother and I When I think about that Sometimes I still cry Many years have passed My how you've grown You're in high school now And have your own cell phone And tho we now live Two states apart I love you so much! With all of my heart! So remember you this Miss Ashley Nicole.... You're my pride and joy You're in my heart and soul And I don't care What people think or say It matters not to me Your true DA With lots of love, Dad

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/5/2011 3:31:00 PM
Hummm, Robert! I like and enjoy the line~ for i put you to sleep up against my chest~ A very lovely poem... DNA* can be the best flow in ones body. 99.9 % awesome ... you need more poetry. I came to check out your poetry... Hope you write and post more heart and every form poems. Thank you so much for the great comment on my poem. Take care of you and whats yours.. God bless,..Linda H.
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Date: 5/19/2011 6:00:00 AM
Hi Rob , I remember this and still think it's one of your most rivetting poems . beautiful to read again. Anne.
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Date: 5/18/2011 12:05:00 PM
This is exceptionally great Rob . I can feel the intense love and pain in your heart . I really appreciate your feelings . I had read this great write on lu lu and I read it again with same gutso . . Trust me ! You are such a sweet person and it reflects in your writing .
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Date: 5/17/2011 4:52:00 AM
I am stopping by your wonderful poetry today to read and thank you for your kind comments Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/16/2011 10:45:00 AM
Such love to bestowe upon your daughter..I know that she will appreciate this love poem..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by my work..Welcome to soup..May your stay be long with many more great works posted...Sara
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Date: 5/16/2011 5:35:00 AM
Excellent write Robert.. an may I say thankxx for your marvelous words to me on my HOLLOW poem.. they are so utterly beautiful and encouraging and I appreciate them very much... haters never win.. so I am a lover of all things and always win.. my mantra in life luv.. keep up the fantastic work and postings and let me know when u write a new one so I can comment to u luv..
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Date: 5/15/2011 4:58:00 AM
Awesome and intrguing thoughts, Robert
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