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dizzy laughs

I had a dream.
I don’t remember most dreams.

I was cleaning the floors of heaven.
It seemed a mixed blessing,
I was in heaven, after all
but I was cleaning the floors.

It was a part time job,
I knew that intuitively.
I don’t mind house cleaning,
heaven cleaning.
It’s calm work, kind of Zen.
Are we supposed to think of religions in heaven?

At first I scrubbed on my hands and knees.
The floors are soft in heaven, like golden gym mats.
Then I thought of it, and suddenly I had a swiffer-wet mop,
just like that - and the pad never wore out.

After a while, I had an iPod, and AirPods too.
Then a daiquiri - a banana daiquiri with a pastel rainbow umbrella.
They make rapturous daiquiris in the hereafter - they never run out.
‘Heavenly,’ I thought, snorting out a dizzy laugh.
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Songs for this:
The River of Dreams Billy Joel
If the Lord Wasn't Walking By My Side by Elvis Presley
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Fallica Avatar
July 8, 2025 at 9:14 AM
<3 . My heaven dream involved getting on the subway at the Union Sq. station with all the other souls. The PA announced things in staticky unintelligible Spanlish. We all got off and had to get on lines by the initial letter of our last names. Angels were walking up and down the lines with clipboards asking souls to check the transcription of our lives. They admonished us to press hard so that our initials made through the triplicate NCR form. . Now that I think of it, maybe it was hell.
Vionet Avatar
July 9, 2025 at 4:02 PM
Ha! Let’s hope not. I don’t believe in heaven and hell - who knows, maybe I’m wrong.
Conn Avatar
July 8, 2025 at 12:15 AM
Miss Limerence strikes again! =]
Vionet Avatar
July 8, 2025 at 4:06 AM
Limerence? I'm very interested in limerence theory, BTW.
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