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My Forever Stain I met death very early in my life, he took my big sister one snowy day; my mothers scream still echoes like a knife, broken within- not a word I would say, and dealt with death by penning my dismay. Years and years- pages and pages I write, oh, yes writing into the dark of night; but I can never ever purge the pain. All my beloved have left scars out of sight, and sorrow will be my forever stain. ____________________________ December 12, 2019 Added after contest judged Jan 11, 2020 Poetry/Dizain/My Forever Stain Copyright Protected, ID 19-1207-307-02 All rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Dizain sponsor, Lu Loo First Place

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Date: 1/14/2020 10:25:00 AM
Deep and very emotional heartfelt write, Dear Heart. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Constance La France
Date: 1/14/2020 3:01:00 PM
Eve thanks for your compassion and for the congratulations!
Date: 1/13/2020 8:34:00 PM
What a beautifully sad Dizain Constance, congrats on another top win, you do write sadness well...if that's any consolation!
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Constance La France
Date: 1/14/2020 3:02:00 PM
John, thanks for visiting my poem and for the congratulations, oh yes, writing sad poetry is my forte !
Date: 1/12/2020 1:54:00 PM
Always you do very well with the topic of grief and death. Congrats on your win, Dear Heart.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/15/2020 2:26:00 AM
Andrea thanks for the compliment and the congratulations!
Date: 1/11/2020 11:21:00 PM
DH, thank you for sharing this poem with your writing community. Thank goodness we have our pens and our words to "deal with death by penning my dismay". From your pain and through your words you are helping others to make it through their time of grief and loss. Many blessings ~ John
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Constance La France
Date: 1/15/2020 2:27:00 AM
John thank you so much for the lovely comment, appreciated!
Date: 1/11/2020 12:48:00 PM
Back to say congrats on your win for this beautifully written sad poem, Constance. Hugs, John
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Constance La France
Date: 1/15/2020 2:33:00 AM
John thanks for the congrats and the compliment on my poem !
Date: 1/11/2020 12:05:00 PM
o yes, my love- you sure did meet death too young- I feel that pain with you and wish I could hug you one day...Congratulations on your placement and thank you for your participation. x:-)-luloo
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Constance La France
Date: 1/15/2020 2:34:00 AM
Lu, thank you for another inspiring contest, your themes always take me deep into my soul and I appreciate the great placement very much!
Date: 12/13/2019 10:04:00 AM
Your sad Dizain is so beautifully written, Constance, best of luck in the contest. Hugs, John
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Constance La France
Date: 12/15/2019 10:57:00 AM
John, thanks for visiting and for the beautiful, yes I write sad ~
Date: 12/13/2019 7:19:00 AM
This is the epitome of sadness, sorry it happened to your family, Constance.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/13/2019 9:09:00 AM
Caren, thanks for visiting and your compassion, well Lu said she wanted dark and death so I gave it to her from my own life !

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