Divorce phoenix

Dazzling spikes elude my confusion as I ponder on the starvation in my essence.
I'll miss you, but glueing to fragments of a pane would drive me to an oasis of oblivion.
Validating on every issue and the insane times, thoughts slipped that I could fix it.
Optimism valiantly caged me in circles, I hope the talks with my little saplings endure.
Renewable freedom not vows, let's dance to this final song of rhythms in happiness as I 
Channel my future to a bouquet of blessings for regrets only dig up the scars.
Every step from here leads to healing and warmth of love to my forever butterflies.

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Date: 2/10/2024 12:16:00 AM
Back to your great poem to congratulate you on your well-deserved win Tonye!
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Date: 2/17/2024 5:02:00 PM
Dear friend, thank you so much. Didn't realise all my comments didn't post.
Date: 1/19/2024 12:18:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win desr tonye. Hope you are doing well. Well deserved win really
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Tonye George
Date: 2/17/2024 5:04:00 PM
Thank you my dear Ink Empress, didn't realise my reply wasn't posted. Thank you, you did great. Much love.
Date: 1/18/2024 3:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win
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Tonye George
Date: 2/17/2024 5:05:00 PM
Thank you karen
Date: 1/18/2024 9:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement Tonvy
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Tonye George
Date: 2/17/2024 5:05:00 PM
Thank you Zahid
Date: 1/18/2024 4:47:00 AM
the starvation in my essence…I’ll miss you (poignant)…thoughts slipped that I could fix it…and looking forward to a future with true love. Congratulations on your top win!!
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Tonye George
Date: 2/17/2024 5:05:00 PM
I appreciate this Kim, thank you.
Date: 1/17/2024 9:40:00 PM
Fantastic job placing 1st in my contest out of 49 poems! Without ever mentioning "marriage," "divorce," "children," or "spouse" you captured the feeling and vibe of the experience completely! Well done!
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Tonye George
Date: 1/18/2024 11:53:00 AM
Thank you Matt for the opportunity to explore creatively and vastly. I'm really glad. Thank you.
Date: 12/12/2023 8:06:00 PM
You are so gifted my friend....Your power of versification stands out. I see in you a very gifted poet. "Optimism valiantly caged me in circles," So you don't want to be caged any more.....! Great Acrostic!
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Tonye George
Date: 12/13/2023 3:07:00 AM
Thank you Valsa. I appreciate your time and support.
Date: 12/12/2023 9:43:00 AM
I love how “acceptance” and the mindset to heal and move on peacefully emanates from your very poetically woven acrostic, brilliant flow and depth and so many lines stood out for me especially “ I'll miss you, but glueing to fragments of a pane would drive me to an oasis of oblivion.“ sometimes it is what it is, and whats best is just separation: best wishes for the contest
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Tonye George
Date: 12/22/2023 9:47:00 AM
Yes Ink, it hurts so much sometimes you need to leave to heal. Thank you dear.
Date: 12/11/2023 3:13:00 PM
I've seen a lot of these. Yours is top notch writing
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Tonye George
Date: 12/11/2023 3:14:00 PM
Thank you, Woody. Thank you.
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