Linda Milgate Poet Limerick

Divorce Memories

Morning bed
Sheets tightly tucked
One pillow crumpled

There once was a gal named Linda
Oh the marriages she did get inta
Try as they would to be as they should
They never could even begin ta.   


Wanting a home intensely  evolved into creations of delusion
Life broke through, one let go, in freedom lay the solution




For the Divorce Club Contest

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Duncan Chappell December 8, 2010 at 4:11 PM nice write here my friend

Harry Horsman December 5, 2010 at 11:37 PM enjoyed these Linda, congrats on your win. Harry

Kabuteng P.Ink K. December 3, 2010 at 9:11 PM I really liked your couplet for this one, Linda--very thought -provoking and I enjoyed your limerick & haiku too :) Congrats on you win! -- nikko :)

Michael J. Falotico December 2, 2010 at 3:11 PM Congrata Linda on your success in contest...

Dr.Ram Mehta December 2, 2010 at 12:59 PM Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, linda

Sheri Fresonke Harper December 2, 2010 at 9:24 AM Good work on these set, enjoyed the humor and the lovely visual haiku, congrats on your win:)

Poet Destroyer A December 2, 2010 at 7:18 AM Linda) Congratulations! With your awesome 3some of 3 differ forms. I had lots of fun reading every entry. I was surprised every one pulled off a beautiful and amazing Job to my request. lol,, and the whole time I thought it was going to be a tough contest,...p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 2, 2010 at 6:43 AM Congrats Linda on your big win in P.D.'s contest with this brilliant write and entry on divorce my friend.. enjoy your top ten victory today with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown December 2, 2010 at 6:01 AM Congratulations Linda for your win in P.D.'s "Divorce Club Contest". Love, Carol

November 30, 2010 at 9:44 AM Enjoyed your creative write for the divorce club contest,good luck and thanks for your comment.Sandra

Joe Maverick November 29, 2010 at 10:37 PM enjoyed your write today, and many thanks for your comment Linda

Andrea Dietrich November 29, 2010 at 8:38 PM Hey, you kind of went along same lines as I did with your haiku, Linda. I REALLY like all three of your entires here. Cool. Luv, Andrea

Billy Thekidster November 28, 2010 at 4:48 PM Interesting modification of that troubled girl limerick. I can't for the life of me however remember it. I do know a winner though and I know that this one is it. No contest. One of the best. You'll rank high in this contest. *TheKidsterWasHere*

Linda Milgate November 28, 2010 at 9:43 AM Wanted to acknowledge the limerick is a modification from an old limerick about a girl who always got inta trouble heard long ago as a child.

Dr.Ram Mehta November 27, 2010 at 2:32 PM I particularly enjoyed the first two with full of wit and yet frolicsome write, linda. Good luck

Sara Kendrick November 27, 2010 at 11:25 AM Interesting write..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner..I appreciate you stopping by and reading my work you seemed to feel the spirit in which I wrote the Haiku about the tree..Divorce is not a good thing but sometimes it happens...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire November 27, 2010 at 9:09 AM This is really cool, Linda!! An excellent, witty entry for the contest and I wish you success. (Really love the way you did the limerick rhyme!) Love, Carolyn

Constance La France November 27, 2010 at 8:53 AM in freedom lay the solution... yep, that did it for me too.. best of luck in the contest~~

John Loving Iii November 27, 2010 at 8:11 AM i like this entry. the limerick. i felt you and wanted to comfort you. John H Loving III

Michael J. Falotico November 27, 2010 at 8:09 AM Well written piece for contest my friend, best of luck