Divorce

Bust up through my home
Whispers shiver behind us
Honestly I tried.

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Date: 4/10/2017 12:37:00 PM
Excellent!! Just excellent...
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 4/11/2017 2:45:00 AM
Thank you Lukas
Date: 4/2/2017 11:16:00 AM
Great summation encapsulated in the form! Well done!
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 4/2/2017 1:08:00 PM
Thank you John for visiting and commenting on my poems.
Date: 3/27/2017 12:37:00 AM
Those 3 line sum up the whole tragedy. Imagine the rest. Lovely raw emotion here
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/27/2017 2:08:00 AM
Thank you. Having not experienced it myself I hope I captured the emotional turmoil divorce brings.
Date: 2/8/2017 12:26:00 PM
Bravo on a first try that reads like a pro! Powerful and effective haiku that delivers a strong punch! Love it! A-7. Pandita
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 2/8/2017 12:58:00 PM
Thank you again for your comments....so kind.
Date: 1/21/2017 4:18:00 PM
What a poem. Excellent.
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 1/22/2017 12:57:00 AM
My first attempt at haiku!
Date: 1/11/2017 2:11:00 PM
Divorce is tough and that middle line gave me shivers.
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 1/11/2017 3:07:00 PM
Thanks for your comment.
Date: 12/16/2016 11:29:00 PM
Wow. I'm speechless - what a great example of every single word counting. Nice job, Elizabeth! This haiku really grabs the reader.
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 12/17/2016 7:19:00 AM
Thank you for your comment. I've just started writing and getting lots of enjoyment from it.