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Divorce

bust up through my home whispers shiver behind us honestly I tried

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Lukas Ficklin

Date: 4/10/2017 12:37:00 PM

Excellent!! Just excellent...

Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 4/11/2017 2:45:00 AM

Thank you Lukas

John Michaels

Date: 4/2/2017 11:16:00 AM

Great summation encapsulated in the form! Well done!

Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 4/2/2017 1:08:00 PM

Thank you John for visiting and commenting on my poems.

Jannie Breedt

Date: 3/27/2017 12:37:00 AM

Those 3 line sum up the whole tragedy. Imagine the rest. Lovely raw emotion here

Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/27/2017 2:08:00 AM

Thank you. Having not experienced it myself I hope I captured the emotional turmoil divorce brings.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 2/8/2017 12:26:00 PM

Bravo on a first try that reads like a pro! Powerful and effective haiku that delivers a strong punch! Love it! A-7. Pandita

Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 2/8/2017 12:58:00 PM

Thank you again for your comments....so kind.

Ricky Sholar

Date: 1/21/2017 4:18:00 PM

What a poem. Excellent.

Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 1/22/2017 12:57:00 AM

My first attempt at haiku!

Phil Capitano

Date: 1/11/2017 2:11:00 PM

Divorce is tough and that middle line gave me shivers.

Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 1/11/2017 3:07:00 PM

Thanks for your comment.

Raven Howell

Date: 12/16/2016 11:29:00 PM

Wow. I'm speechless - what a great example of every single word counting. Nice job, Elizabeth! This haiku really grabs the reader.

Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 12/17/2016 7:19:00 AM

Thank you for your comment. I've just started writing and getting lots of enjoyment from it.