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November 23, 2023

Contest : Divorce

Sponsored by : Matt Caliri

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Divergence of the roads vowed to walk to the end together In the institution of marriage where distrust dusts gather Veers with conflicting mindsets into emotional challenges Observes how the chord of the conjugal harmony changes. Rise from the ruins of quality time once shared but gone Chart a new course of self-regulating life and move on Ebon night ends for the new sun to rise in another dawn.

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Date: 1/18/2024 4:57:00 AM
Observes how the chord of the conjugal harmony changes…Uniquely said in your poetic voice. Congratulations, Subimal, on your impressive win!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 1/24/2024 10:47:00 PM
Thank you, Kim.
Date: 1/17/2024 9:49:00 PM
Congrats placing 6th place out of 49 entries! Loved "conjugal harmony changes" and the use of "ebon" for the last line. Well-crafted all the way around. Well done!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 1/24/2024 10:46:00 PM
Thank you, Matt for the placement, and for your encouraging comments.

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