Divorce

Days of romance and promises disappeared, Instantaneous discussions turn into arguments, Value of parental love and relationships put aside, Oh, how can I forget that you are mother of my children, Remember, we may live away from each other, we are their Ma and Pa, Complicated it may seem, once deep love can be amended, Eternally living in peace and love of family, would erase all the woes.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/22/2023 7:02:00 PM

So true. Very well done, Jay

Valsa George

Date: 11/21/2023 9:45:00 PM

When grown old, people become wiser. Really enjoyed your sagacious perceptions on marriage and divorce. Beautiful advice to all youngsters when divorce becomes so rampant.

Bill Baker

Date: 11/21/2023 3:11:00 PM

Wise advice in your Acrostic poem on Divorce, Jay. Good luck in the contest, my friend. I want to congratulate you for having three of your poems published in Poetry Soup's latest Anthology! YEAH !!! Have a Happy Thanksgiving, my friend. Bill

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/20/2023 6:02:00 PM

Jay, Your Acrostic encapsulates the essence of divorce through profound and poignant imagery. I greatly admire the artistry displayed in this piece! Good luck in the contest.

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/20/2023 12:21:00 PM

I like this one. Sounds like a voice of experience. Good luck! Well done!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/20/2023 11:45:00 AM

Your "Divorce" is a wonderful yet sad write. Good Luck... I also did this one. Have a great day............