Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

Divine Spark

he knows his alphabet and counts to forty
socially inept a heart that’s free of guiles
his mind confused he sits aloof in his own world
outsiders attach their numerous labels

it’s still a mystery what goes on in that subconscious
there’s a level of corrosion in his young brain
I seldom get to break the seal
and relish in precious moments of lucidity
though far and few between

he’ll contort his body when cuddled
that my touch is not welcomed
it hurts so I want to cry

but sometimes the sun
the moon the stars align
and I see a spark light up his eyes
there’s no happier surprise

that’s when I see God’s signature
on this exquisite work of art



AP: 2nd place 2020

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Caren Krutsinger August 25, 2019 at 6:46 AM "it’s still a mystery what goes on in that subconscious there’s a level of corrosion in his young brain" - Love the way the poem turned and you see the spark of recognition. And then they do something they just found out how to do over and over and over and it is great! Line Gauthier August 25, 2019 at 7:13 AM Thanks, Caren, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Gershon Wolf August 23, 2019 at 2:25 PM Gosh, Line. This whole poem is just divine. Wonderful visioning and insights. Heartfelt. The reader - me - feels strongly that you mean every single word. And that's especially important in this poem. Warm wishes, Gershon Line Gauthier August 23, 2019 at 2:28 PM Thank you so much for your wonderful visit and compliment, Gershon. Most appreciated.