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Ringing with sentiments of love sublime Cheering my soul along blest wondrous chime Divine song echoes great salvation gift Offered by God toward heavenly lift. Securing me around sovereign embrace Moving my heart with pathos of sweet grace Divine song reverberates assured hope Marked by the Lord’s peace in crescendo scope. Whispering mellow sounds of comfort gain Upholding my faith to smite grief and pain Divine song vibrates midst melodic voice The Saviour affirms for me to rejoice. Jubilant music of grand rhythmic flow Driving my spirit for worship aglow Divine song* triumphs with redemption mirth Along grand chorus exalting Christ’s worth.
*Colossians 3:16 - Let the word of Christ dwell in you richly in all wisdom; teaching and admonishing one another in psalms and hymns and spiritual songs, singing with grace in your hearts to the Lord. July 26, 2022 1st place, "One In Five 2-Sentimental Song" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Joseph May; judged on 7/29/2022.

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Date: 8/3/2022 8:56:00 AM
Add a refrain to this and it would be a lovely song Beata. Congratulations on your deserving First place win containing such spiritual beauty my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/30/2022 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations, Beata. I don’t really do ‘God stuff’ but I found the rhythm straight off and even with my cackling wails it sang well. Terry
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Date: 7/30/2022 9:06:00 AM
Wonderful write Beata, Congrats on your win
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Date: 7/30/2022 6:21:00 AM
Sweet sentiments! Congratulations, Beata!
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Date: 7/26/2022 10:36:00 AM
Good luck with thiese moving lyrics that carry which carry and hum with the love of Christ! Panagiota xxx
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