Divine Intervention

Was he in the wrong place at the right time?
Slipping, sliding, dying
to live;
just a kid.
Mom and Grandma busy,
gabbing, too far
away.

Was he in the right place,
a parental replacement
for such a time as this?

A little boy with prayers said
over him
while he traveled life’s rough roads;
even his carriage ride was bumpy.

After transferring hands a couple times,
the little boy found himself in Germany,
a celebration,
now his feet are slipping and sliding,
he can’t get a hold -
the pond, his death pondering.

An old man reaches in and snatches out
this little kid.

Just as soon as the boy is saved,
the angel disappears.

That boy grows up
and marries me.

5/23/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kauffman Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 10:47 AM
Truly we are among God's messengers and angels Kim. An amazing story. Congratulations on your win. God definitely had a divine plan for your husband and for you. Blessings!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 3:17 PM
Thank you, Sam! <3
George Avatar
May 30, 2022 at 10:07 PM
Definitely a divine intervention. So you too got blessed !Congratulations on your great win ......
Rodrigues Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 3:10 PM
Thank you, Valsa!
Kiser Avatar
May 30, 2022 at 2:26 PM
Aw, glad he was helped by divine intervention, that could've been a horror. Well penned.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 30, 2022 at 4:03 PM
Thank you!
Gasun Avatar
May 29, 2022 at 7:28 AM
Wow! An incredible write of divine intervention that ended up into a beautiful love story. This is so precious my dear friend Kim. I'm so happy to read it tonight. I love it. Thanks for sharing and CONGRATULATIONS on your shining win! God bless you and your hubby and the whole family always. Hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
May 30, 2022 at 4:04 PM
Thank you, Len!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 27, 2022 at 8:47 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful story/write. He was saved just for you. Angels are all around us. Most are not seen. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend..............
Rodrigues Avatar
May 27, 2022 at 4:38 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Alex Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 9:37 PM
Great boy and you. Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 27, 2022 at 4:36 PM
Thank you!
Watt Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 4:32 PM
God is good! Thank you for sharing this inspirational story from your husband's past, and congrats for your podium win ~ John
Rodrigues Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 8:54 PM
Thank you, John!
Drowley Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 1:52 PM
Congratulations on an excellent write. A beautiful blessing flowed from the intervention.intervention!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 3:49 PM
Thank you, David!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 7:59 AM
Ah, this was marvelously penned!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 3:48 PM
Thank you, Caren!
Edmonds  Avatar
May 24, 2022 at 8:31 PM
What a wonderful story Kim, a lovely ending it was too, definitely divine intervention… Belle
Rodrigues Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 3:48 PM
Thank you, Belle!
Seeker Avatar
May 24, 2022 at 5:17 AM
Wow! So grippingly narrated, enjoyed
Rodrigues Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 3:48 PM
Thank you, Unseeking Seeker!
Buhagiar Avatar
May 24, 2022 at 1:28 AM
Reminds me of ABBA's song: I believe in angels. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 3:48 PM
Aww! Thank you, Victor!
Dutta Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 9:21 PM
WOW. ANGEL appears at right time.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 3:47 PM
Absolutely!
Buehler Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 8:48 PM
Your story of the angel encounter is beautiful and heartwarming, Kim. Wonderful writing. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 3:47 PM
Thank you, Evelyn!
Wolf Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 8:15 PM
Whoa! Destiny delivers!! Good for both of you. A memorable write as well, Kim. Thanks, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 8:22 PM
Thank you! Especially thank God!
Leiser Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 3:16 PM
Wow, this is a miracle! You framed the story so well with your words, Kim! Excellent!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 8:01 PM
Thank you, Laura!
Dietrich Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 11:37 AM
wow, THIS is awesome, Kim. For me, it's already a winner.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 12:41 PM
Thank you so much, my friend!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 10:33 AM
The advent of destined endearment occasions righteously, Kim, thanks for the smile my friend, Aloha~William
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 12:41 PM
Thank you, William!
Sands Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 9:20 AM
Wow! What a powerful poem and awesome ending ! Well done :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 12:42 PM
Thank you!
Zahid Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 6:36 AM
Ending surprised poem. Well Penned. And good luck in the contest
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 7:53 AM
Thank you, Paghunda!
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 6:30 AM
Wow Kim, a great ending to this lovely poem. I am sure this will do well in the contest. Blessings xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 7:53 AM
And a true story!
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