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Divine Intervention

Was he in the wrong place at the right time? Slipping, sliding, dying to live; just a kid. Mom and Grandma busy, gabbing, too far away. Was he in the right place, a parental replacement for such a time as this? A little boy with prayers said over him while he traveled life’s rough roads; even his carriage ride was bumpy. After transferring hands a couple times, the little boy found himself in Germany, a celebration, now his feet are slipping and sliding, he can’t get a hold - the pond, his death pondering. An old man reaches in and snatches out this little kid. Just as soon as the boy is saved, the angel disappears. That boy grows up and marries me. 5/23/2022

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Date: 5/31/2022 10:47:00 AM
Truly we are among God's messengers and angels Kim. An amazing story. Congratulations on your win. God definitely had a divine plan for your husband and for you. Blessings!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2022 3:17:00 PM
Thank you, Sam! <3
Date: 5/30/2022 10:07:00 PM
Definitely a divine intervention. So you too got blessed !Congratulations on your great win ......
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2022 3:10:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa!
Date: 5/30/2022 2:26:00 PM
Aw, glad he was helped by divine intervention, that could've been a horror. Well penned.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/30/2022 4:03:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 5/29/2022 7:28:00 AM
Wow! An incredible write of divine intervention that ended up into a beautiful love story. This is so precious my dear friend Kim. I'm so happy to read it tonight. I love it. Thanks for sharing and CONGRATULATIONS on your shining win! God bless you and your hubby and the whole family always. Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/30/2022 4:04:00 PM
Thank you, Len!
Date: 5/27/2022 8:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful story/write. He was saved just for you. Angels are all around us. Most are not seen. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend..............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/27/2022 4:38:00 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 5/26/2022 9:37:00 PM
Great boy and you. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/27/2022 4:36:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 5/26/2022 4:32:00 PM
God is good! Thank you for sharing this inspirational story from your husband's past, and congrats for your podium win ~ John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/26/2022 8:54:00 PM
Thank you, John!
Date: 5/26/2022 1:52:00 PM
Congratulations on an excellent write. A beautiful blessing flowed from the intervention.intervention!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/26/2022 3:49:00 PM
Thank you, David!
Date: 5/25/2022 7:59:00 AM
Ah, this was marvelously penned!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/26/2022 3:48:00 PM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 5/24/2022 8:31:00 PM
What a wonderful story Kim, a lovely ending it was too, definitely divine intervention… Belle
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/26/2022 3:48:00 PM
Thank you, Belle!
Date: 5/24/2022 5:17:00 AM
Wow! So grippingly narrated, enjoyed
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/26/2022 3:48:00 PM
Thank you, Unseeking Seeker!
Date: 5/24/2022 1:28:00 AM
Reminds me of ABBA's song: I believe in angels. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/26/2022 3:48:00 PM
Aww! Thank you, Victor!
Date: 5/23/2022 9:21:00 PM
WOW. ANGEL appears at right time.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/26/2022 3:47:00 PM
Absolutely!
Date: 5/23/2022 8:48:00 PM
Your story of the angel encounter is beautiful and heartwarming, Kim. Wonderful writing. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/26/2022 3:47:00 PM
Thank you, Evelyn!
Date: 5/23/2022 8:15:00 PM
Whoa! Destiny delivers!! Good for both of you. A memorable write as well, Kim. Thanks, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2022 8:22:00 PM
Thank you! Especially thank God!
Date: 5/23/2022 3:16:00 PM
Wow, this is a miracle! You framed the story so well with your words, Kim! Excellent!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2022 8:01:00 PM
Thank you, Laura!
Date: 5/23/2022 11:37:00 AM
wow, THIS is awesome, Kim. For me, it's already a winner.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2022 12:41:00 PM
Thank you so much, my friend!
Date: 5/23/2022 10:33:00 AM
The advent of destined endearment occasions righteously, Kim, thanks for the smile my friend, Aloha~William
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2022 12:41:00 PM
Thank you, William!
Date: 5/23/2022 9:20:00 AM
Wow! What a powerful poem and awesome ending ! Well done :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2022 12:42:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 5/23/2022 6:36:00 AM
Ending surprised poem. Well Penned. And good luck in the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2022 7:53:00 AM
Thank you, Paghunda!
Date: 5/23/2022 6:30:00 AM
Wow Kim, a great ending to this lovely poem. I am sure this will do well in the contest. Blessings xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2022 7:53:00 AM
And a true story!

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