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A girl with her mind in the gutter Did not know why her heart would flutter A priest came along Who knew what was wrong And showed her the way to churn butter

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Date: 6/15/2020 3:24:00 PM
Remarkable lines, true words, amazing piece from a very deep and wise mind. I love every bit of this. Great work Rico
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Date: 6/14/2020 11:10:00 AM
Good one! If priests were allowed to marry they wouldn't have to play milkmen. Can't the Catholic church read scripture? Peter was married as were other disciples, and mandatory celibacy was not part of the Mosaic law as far as Jewish disciples were concerned. Thank you for commenting on my work. / M
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Date: 6/13/2020 8:21:00 PM
G'day Rico … yes Rico. When it comes to teaching morals, where does this Priest stand? Thanks again for a fine limerick Rico - Lindsay
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Date: 6/14/2020 12:59:00 PM
upright, of course! Aloha! Rico
Date: 6/13/2020 4:29:00 PM
Whenever I need a good laugh I know where to go. I loved and laughed at this clever Limerick Rico. Thank you! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/14/2020 1:03:00 PM
Mahalo, Connie! Though an ancient art, I am surprised anyone today knows churning butter builds strong wrists! Aloha! Rico
Date: 6/13/2020 4:27:00 PM
LOL! That priest should have been in his study working on his next sermon!
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 6/14/2020 1:01:00 PM
All knowledge is useless until it is applied! Aloha! Rico
Date: 6/13/2020 2:12:00 PM
I bet he did ;D, funny stuff, hugs! xomo
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Date: 6/14/2020 1:02:00 PM
How did you know the stuff was funny? I am surprised anyone these days knows how to churn butter! Aloha! Rico
Date: 6/13/2020 2:05:00 PM
love the title to this one, rico!
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 6/14/2020 1:00:00 PM
Mahalo, Ilene! Aloha! Rico

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