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Wondrous hallowed win midst fellowship* treat blest blissfulness around stewardship fleet there brothers and sisters each other greet “God’s love be with you” as they gladly meet. Divine gathering, festively complete binding heart and soul, devoid of deceit offering blessings, surpassing trick’s cheat being health-vigilant for veggie meat. Triumphant prayer moments now defeat pandemic-caused fear and doubt-filled heart beat while faith in the Lord drives reaching-out feet blazed by life-transforming revival heat. Gospel sharing along “Halloween Street" Christ’s grace glows to reign with His peace so sweet as kids enjoy Bible stories on their seat ready for fruit candies they long to eat.
*1John 1:3 That which we have seen and heard declare we unto you, that ye also may have fellowship with us: and truly our fellowship is with the Father, and with his Son Jesus Christ. October 29, 2021 3rd place, "Halloween Monorhyme Contest" Sponsored by Caren Krutsinger; judged on 11/9/2021.

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Date: 11/10/2021 10:00:00 AM
Truly Halloween is a time to laugh at death and revel in Christ's victory while enjoying "fruit candies" and the fruit of faith! As always, wonderful expression of your beautiful faith that blesses us with fellowship! Congratulations and kudos for your win!
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Date: 11/9/2021 10:36:00 PM
Awesome write, Beata. Halloween is such a fun time for the children. Congratulations on your win. Hugs
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Date: 10/31/2021 10:27:00 PM
Awesome poem Kabayan. I like it. Good luck, I'm sure you will win the contest. Have a great day. :) ;)
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