Get Your Premium Membership

Divine Forgiveness

Stream of errant emotion spurts out of your mind, scathing currents erode the brittle banks. The mistaken course pervades unrelentably, and drowns deep the pieces of my broken heart. If compassion could change the aberrant channel, within contours of forgiveness I’d embrace you. You’d find ahead a turning meander for the soul that would flow to the placid bay of bliss. You stoke the contrived fire of betrayal, consuming the canopy of verdant longing. The flame rages uncontrollably untamed, and burns the flowers together we'd bloomed. If tolerance could dowse the deviant fire, I’d shower divine rains of forgiveness on you. You’d find silver lining around melting clouds, and we'll walk life to the realm of rainbow. For God bestows mercy on mortal sinners, to err is human; to forgive, divine.
(Inspired by : "To err is human; to forgive, divine" - Alexander Pope.) February 7, 2020 Contest : Famous Poetic Lines 2 Sponsor : Silent One May 17, 2020 Contest : Brian's Choice H Sponsor : Brian Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/10/2020 3:38:00 PM
Exceptional creation.. Stunning creation. Congratulations on your win. God bless..
Login to Reply
Date: 2/9/2020 2:32:00 PM
A beautiful inspired poem Subimal. Congratulations on your wonderful second placement! He certainly gave us some wonderful quotes to work with didn't he! xxoo
Login to Reply
Date: 2/9/2020 11:38:00 AM
wonderful penning...nice to see one with this line as a choice... you did well with it, congratulations on your win :) hugs
Login to Reply
Date: 2/9/2020 9:23:00 AM
- I like how you took this line in to your poem ... excellent, Subimal :) - Congratulations so much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 2/9/2020 6:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs