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Divine Breath

Last Night,
I watched you breathe.
Contemplating every rise and fall
As an incredible mystery.
Every curve and angle,
God's masterpiece-
a treasure beyond knowing.
Last night, I watched you breathe
and I loved.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/13/2016 12:45:00 AM
true visions of Beauty....occupy our minds as a duty....because from them comes the Love....needed to gain Strength From Above....where even the slightest sound of breath....is all we need to define self....wonderful as always jaycee....;)
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 2/17/2016 6:20:00 PM
Thank you much Eric.. Hope cupid was kind this Valentines day.
Date: 4/10/2015 6:33:00 PM
outstanding golden pen beautifully painted janet
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/10/2015 7:00:00 PM
Thank you Liam
Date: 4/9/2015 9:12:00 PM
Short, sweet and packs a punch. I watched my son breathe this morning for a full 5 minutes before waking him to get dressed for school today.. A wonderful poem you have written! A7
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/10/2015 9:37:00 AM
Sometimes we don't take time to appreciate everything we have. this is one of my joys. Sounds like 5 minutes well spent to me, Robert. I hope it made your day! ~Jan
Date: 4/8/2015 6:17:00 AM
Wow this is a beautiful piece of creation #7
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/8/2015 12:35:00 PM
Thanks Njeri for the 7. Thanks for stopping by to read today! ~jan
Date: 4/8/2015 6:15:00 AM
Janet - just the perfect length! Any longer and it wouldn't have the impact it has now. My favorite line..."every curve and angle". Wonderful!
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/8/2015 12:32:00 PM
Thanks so much Raven! Sometimes the hardest thing is to just cut it off and resist the urge to keep going.
Date: 4/7/2015 2:24:00 PM
I was looking at my little girl the other night..It was breathtaking ...lovely Tim
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/7/2015 2:26:00 PM
One of life"s many little joys...I'm glad you took the time to embrace it, Tim. I know she is precious...they all are. ((HUGS)) ~Jan
Date: 4/7/2015 1:25:00 PM
Sweet! I picture a mother watching her brand new baby. ;)
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/7/2015 1:51:00 PM
Ann, I started to write this as something to my husband, and it is, but I also recalled those nights of just watching my babies sleep. And so I stopped and left it much shorter than intended. Sometimes it good to just stop and let it be...and watch your loved ones breathe. ((HUGS)) ~jan