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Divine Bliss

Written: April 26, 2024 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Awakening, my soul climbs to pure bliss, The vertex wobble, swayed by the sun's kiss. A flame within my spirit burning bright, For me, the scene looks same as windy sight. Majestic peak reaches toward the sky, Whispering life's elixir with descry. My heart has never seen such a sweet light, I found solace with shelter in my plight. my soul is boosted by the sunlit lake, serene in silver; in my eyes, thrills wake. A serene gold, waking thrills in my gaze, Leaves are retained by trees, and limbs arise. Bewitched by its gathered emerald cloud, My spirit soars to peaceful heaven shroud.
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George Avatar
April 26, 2024 at 10:33 PM
Beauty, joy and serenity emanate from your lovely poem. The sunlit lake is presented in all its loveliness. Reading this beautiful poem, my soul too has climbed to pure bliss. You are so much at ease with the use of spontaneous rhymes, and I feel poetry is in your life blood. Have a great Sunday dear friend.
Pandit Avatar
April 26, 2024 at 4:42 PM
Much enjoyed the vibrant voice of your poem, my friend. Beauty and serenity of nature resonate throughout.
Sands Avatar
April 26, 2024 at 3:59 PM
Beautiful ! I enjoyed listening to it . A Fave :)
Sands Avatar
April 26, 2024 at 3:59 PM
Beautiful ! I enjoyed listening to it . A Fave :)
Sands Avatar
April 26, 2024 at 3:59 PM
Beautiful ! I enjoyed listening to it . A Fave :)
May Avatar
April 26, 2024 at 3:49 PM
Very nicely done Sotto, I enjoyed the read
Hamilton Avatar
April 26, 2024 at 1:37 PM
this is beautiful Sotto rounded off by the last two lines bewitched indeed kudos my friend hugs Shadow
Rodrigues Avatar
April 26, 2024 at 12:31 PM
Majestic peak reaches toward the sky, Whispering life's elixir with descry…love the sunlit lake, serenity in silver and gold…the joy of it all!
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