Divine Bliss

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Written: April 26, 2024

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Awakening, my soul climbs to pure bliss,
The vertex wobble, swayed by the sun's kiss.
A flame within my spirit burning bright,
For me, the scene looks same as windy sight.

Majestic peak reaches toward the sky,
Whispering life's elixir with descry.
My heart has never seen such a sweet light,
I found solace with shelter in my plight.

my soul is boosted by the sunlit lake,
serene in silver; in my eyes, thrills wake.
A serene gold, waking thrills in my gaze,
Leaves are retained by trees, and limbs arise.

Bewitched by its gathered emerald cloud,
My spirit soars to peaceful heaven shroud.

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Valsa George

Date: 4/26/2024 10:33:00 PM

Beauty, joy and serenity emanate from your lovely poem. The sunlit lake is presented in all its loveliness. Reading this beautiful poem, my soul too has climbed to pure bliss. You are so much at ease with the use of spontaneous rhymes, and I feel poetry is in your life blood. Have a great Sunday dear friend.