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Dive Bomber - Tet

Dive bomber carpenter with red-stained teeth
suicidal
buzzing sound
creeps me
  out

4/24/2019
Tetractys This Poetry Contest
Sponsor - Charles Messina

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Eve Roper

May 7, 2019 at 4:13 PM

Congratulations on your Tetractys form win. Hugs eve

Kim Rodrigues

May 7, 2019 at 9:56 PM

Thanks, Eve! xx

Andrea Dietrich

May 4, 2019 at 2:41 PM

a fly? I enjoyed this one, Kim! Congrats on the win.

Kim Rodrigues

May 5, 2019 at 7:37 AM

A Carpenter Bee! We have a home they love to dig into and they are territorial!

Alexis Y.

May 4, 2019 at 11:54 AM

Hi Kim, It creeps me out too! Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis

Kim Rodrigues

May 5, 2019 at 7:38 AM

Thank you, Alexis!

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 4, 2019 at 8:17 AM

- Congratulations :)

Kim Rodrigues

May 5, 2019 at 7:39 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Charles Messina

May 4, 2019 at 7:49 AM

Creeps me out too, Kim. (lol) Awesome write as usual. Congratulations on your win. So many excellent poems in this contest (yours as well) Hugs Charlie

Kim Rodrigues

May 5, 2019 at 7:39 AM

Thank you, Charles :)