Disturbed

ripped my head
clean off my shoulders !
and yet here I am
observing the remains 
of a head on collision

there is blood everywhere
and I havent passed out
my Kawasaki will never
ride with me again
hey, but I'm not in pain
and my head came clean off !

Where am I ?


(C)2017 Lenny Gazbowski
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Johnston Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 12:42 PM
I suspect that dying is a lot like this Lenny? Hope that your Kawasaki recovers even if some parts are out of stock! Ha!
Merryman Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 4:22 PM
This is different! Humorous and creative! Good one, Lenny! Blessings, Kim
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