Disturbed

Some people don’t know they smell
Inside my mind it makes me yell
Why on earth can’t they tell
It’s offensive the way they smell

Excuse me, I have a nose. 
It has a complaint my whole body knows
The more they’re around it just grows and grows
I don’t even think they know

I just got the notion that it’s scary
Homeless or not, it’s not ordinary
Lack of water or change of clothes
Dirty underwear socks with holes

If people can smell you from six feet away
Know it or not you ruined a day
No matter the environment you just may
Be the cause of confusion and utter dismay

I’ve never met an animal that smelled that much
Only humans have that type of disgust
Sometimes athletes stink with must
But this something I smell 
is worse than I can cuss

Eviction, conviction, you can run away from smoke
It may make me sick I just want to choke
If it weren’t so near me I wouldn’t write
But these words of mine is me in a fight

Love can change a persons day
A smile and hello have a certain sway
The smell of food can pave the way
But rotting corpses should stay away

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Date: 11/14/2023 7:41:00 PM
TS, I know the feeling well, personal hygiene is a must. A great write and so very true… Belle
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Date: 11/11/2023 5:51:00 PM
That's terrible, TS, I hope someone let him know the smell didn't belong in the library. Of course I feel sorry for him if he is homeless, but there are shelter and places that serve meals and provide a place to shower. Tough situation, but good poetry, my friend. Have a great Weekend, Bill
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Date: 11/9/2023 1:16:00 PM
oh my, this is someone close to you? You have to come right out and say something. I remember when an Asian person was in my ESL class many years ago. He ate garlic even for breakfast and hardly ever bathed. It was horrible, and one student put a clothespin on her nose but I don't think he even realized why she did it. Finally the administration had to talk to him. I can't remember if he ever improved or not!
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Date: 11/9/2023 1:42:00 PM
A homeless guy in the library
Date: 11/9/2023 10:21:00 AM
I don't know what it is with some people today... maybe they think that's funny, but it would be better if they showed more respect for others around them... You've expressed your grievances well here, and with great rhythm and rhyme. Very nicely written!
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Date: 11/9/2023 2:23:00 AM
Nice use of monorhymes in this odiferous write
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Date: 11/8/2023 10:09:00 AM
They just get used to it Hilarious poem btw
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Date: 11/7/2023 12:58:00 AM
Humorous and hard hitting. Hahahaha!
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Date: 11/6/2023 10:17:00 PM
Hah this is so funny! And so true! Ah they cant tell true! This poem made me smile! “ excuse me i have a nose” that line. And that ending is so beautiful! True! Love can change a persons day truly
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