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Disturb Me Not

Disturb not my peace! Oh flowers! With thy sweet scents, that haunt, daunt Worse, thy prattle with butterflies Lest her thoughts retrace my heart; taunt Disturb not my sloth! Oh silly winds With thy grating, gyrating caresses You rind my confidence, I had Been pretending with courage-false Disturb not my silence! Oh senses! With dreams, desires and promises I spurned long ago your finesse When she took my love; gave distress

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/4/2012 2:18:00 AM
Nice poem... much feeling... Terry
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Date: 9/2/2011 6:13:00 PM
I really enjoy the tone of this poem. I may not be going in the right direction with this, but it made me feel a kind of desperation almost- like a need...
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Date: 8/29/2011 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations Mydavolu on your fine poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/8/2011 10:56:00 AM
How difficult it must be to express such emotion while adhering to the form... excellent!
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Date: 8/5/2011 2:30:00 PM
Difficult piece that is well written, I enjoyed it thank you
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Mydavolu Venkatasesha Sathyanarayana
Date: 8/5/2011 2:33:00 PM
THANK YOU SO MUCH RICHARD
Date: 8/5/2011 2:28:00 PM
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Date: 8/5/2011 12:18:00 PM
Oh, how sad, yet beautiful! Great job! :)
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Mydavolu Venkatasesha Sathyanarayana
Date: 8/5/2011 12:29:00 PM
THANK YOU SO MUCH RACHEL
Date: 8/5/2011 12:08:00 PM
not an easy piece to write, but this has been done well i like this good poetry.
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Mydavolu Venkatasesha Sathyanarayana
Date: 8/5/2011 12:10:00 PM
Thank you Steven for the appreciation.

Book: Shattered Sighs