Mydavolu Venkatasesha Sathyanarayana Poet Quatrain

Disturb Me Not

Disturb not my peace! Oh flowers!
With thy sweet scents, that haunt, daunt
Worse, thy prattle with butterflies
Lest her thoughts retrace my heart; taunt

Disturb not my sloth! Oh silly winds
With thy grating, gyrating caresses
You rind my confidence, I had
Been pretending with courage-false

Disturb not my silence! Oh senses!
With dreams, desires and promises
I spurned long ago your finesse
When she took my love; gave distress

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Terry O'Leary May 4, 2012 at 2:18 AM Nice poem... much feeling... Terry

Gina Young September 2, 2011 at 6:13 PM I really enjoy the tone of this poem. I may not be going in the right direction with this, but it made me feel a kind of desperation almost- like a need...

Carol Sunshine Brown August 29, 2011 at 11:08 AM Congratulations Mydavolu on your fine poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

Linda Long August 8, 2011 at 10:56 AM How difficult it must be to express such emotion while adhering to the form... excellent!

Richard Moriarty August 5, 2011 at 2:30 PM Difficult piece that is well written, I enjoyed it thank you Mydavolu Venkatasesha Sathyanarayana August 5, 2011 at 2:33 PM THANK YOU SO MUCH RICHARD

Mydavolu Venkatasesha Sathyanarayana August 5, 2011 at 2:28 PM

Rachel Heffington August 5, 2011 at 12:18 PM Oh, how sad, yet beautiful! Great job! :) Mydavolu Venkatasesha Sathyanarayana August 5, 2011 at 12:29 PM THANK YOU SO MUCH RACHEL

Steven Cooke August 5, 2011 at 12:08 PM not an easy piece to write, but this has been done well i like this good poetry. Mydavolu Venkatasesha Sathyanarayana August 5, 2011 at 12:10 PM Thank you Steven for the appreciation.