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Poem written for and submitted to “Pen Something to This Prompt” poetry contest, Sotto Poet, sponsor, November 5, 2025.  

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The broken amphora leaks wine dark as ink~ not for drowning sorrows but for making sigils on stars. We don’t merely rearrange rubble with our words we ignite phosphorus in marrow-bones guiding wanderers through sulfurous nights. When the world grinds its sermons into dust, we distill comet-trails from the grime. Those soaring meditations? They become bridges where ghosts cross with new alphabets, each footfall cracking the ground into stars.
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Hind Avatar
November 8, 2025 at 10:36 PM
Wow, Sara. This is a powerhouse of a poem. I think I see a winner. This reads as exactly what poets long to reach.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 5:07 PM
Your comments make me feel confident and motivated....thank you, hugs, Sara
Kendrick Avatar
November 6, 2025 at 2:51 AM
Definitely creative using some fresh and unused metaphors in the lines. It reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 7:26 AM
wow, thanks Sara K, for your words of confidence. Glad you liked it!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 12:43 PM
I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. Great Picture... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Hope You Have Autumn Blessings As You Write Away.............
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 7:27 AM
thanks, sweet Paula
Gauthier Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 10:56 AM
Powerful last stanza ~ wonderful poem
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 7:27 AM
thank you, Line!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 8:21 AM
Richly enthused metaphors, explanatives of your rendition in its perfect outlay, bravo, my friend, I am very pleased that you’ve weathered yourself an ideal storm I had mentioned earlier, for your dry bed is well fed, and thensome, bravo once again, my friend, and of course, Aloha, William.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 7:29 AM
thank you, William, for visiting and for your comments about my metaphors. Your visits are always meaningful to me,....appreciate you, Sara
DiMino Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 6:42 AM
"We don’t merely rearrange rubble with our words we ignite phosphorus in marrow-bones" -- Love that! "each footfall cracking the ground into stars." Great imagery. Great read as always.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 7:27 AM
thank you, Joe, for your visit and for your positive comments. enjoy your day, SAra
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