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Words offer us distilled emotion. Many feelings expressed in a poem. A gift that can work like a potion. When words are read we don't feel alone. Verse can transport us through space and time. Many feelings expressed in a poem. Memories of flowers or the taste of lime. A first kiss from many years ago. Verse can transport us through space and time. Family and friends and a mistletoe. The person who took our breath away. A first kiss from many years ago. Remembering how we used to play. Special people who have touched us so. The person who took our breath away. New possibilities we did not know. Special people who have touched us so. Words offer us distilled emotion. A gift that can work like a potion.

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Date: 12/6/2013 8:14:00 PM
wonderful Rick well captured Shadow x smile hug
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/6/2013 10:40:00 PM
Thanks Shadow. ;0)
Date: 12/5/2013 8:29:00 AM
Absolutely! Words connect everyone no matter the language. Even if you don't understand the word being said you can feel the meaning. Now if we could all remember to speak with kindness.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/5/2013 8:51:00 AM
You seem to have mastered that gift Monterey!
Date: 12/3/2013 8:54:00 AM
I drink to this. Absolutely. We, as humanity, can make such a difference in this ever-changing world of ours today...especially as poets. Cheers to this!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/3/2013 9:11:00 AM
I clink your glass and drink deeply from your thoughtful comment.
Date: 12/3/2013 8:35:00 AM
I feel emotions expressed in the poem, Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/3/2013 9:14:00 AM
I am glad you felt them. Thanks Dr. Ram.
Date: 12/3/2013 8:30:00 AM
:) :) :) Terzanelle!!!! I'm connecting! Beautiful work, Richard. Simply beautiful. For me, words are about the most priceless of gifts! :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/3/2013 9:15:00 AM
I thought of you when I wrote it because I know you enjoy this form.
Date: 12/3/2013 8:19:00 AM
a beauty of a poem for me to see this morning. And the only one. It's snowing and I better get out the door early today before the street is too covered by snow!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/3/2013 9:20:00 AM
We had a little bit of snow over night. Maybe it is better to just stay home and be nice and cozy.

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