James Peranteau Poet Free verse

distended l'lips

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            in her arms I collapse

                   From sweat
                    And pangs
                Of the early heat
                          az
              hern distended lips 
                         drip

    and of the once I thought sylph
                       Which
                 To my rescue
             Would never come
                    she came

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Chiquitachiamaka Baity September 5, 2011 at 12:13 AM Great peace James...luv it...thanks so much for sharing....smiles....chiquita James Peranteau June 1, 2021 at 9:55 PM Ty, and another belated ty hon....much love, james

Carol Sunshine Brown July 21, 2011 at 7:00 AM It is so hot here in Ohio the last few days and they say stay in if you can. Well I can and so I thought this would be a wonderful day to thank everyone for their kind comments on my poetry. So I say thank you to you for the kind words and for sharing your amazing poetry with us James. Love, Carol

Daver Austin June 20, 2011 at 11:06 AM If I read this - forgive me - I don't remember it. Anywho. Love this one. Congratulations. YOu must have worked very hard. Love, daver

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 2, 2011 at 1:09 PM winkers back at ya James.. romantically creative with visual vibrancy my friend and partner.. oh.. perfect lips sounds like to me to refresh u from the heat.. oh..

Insatiable Piyush June 1, 2011 at 4:20 AM The best part...she came...luv u for that...grt poem..

Gwendolen Song May 31, 2011 at 6:33 PM Dripping with romance for sure! She rescued you indeed! Did u want to borrow my bike? ha ha. Glad you liked my eco friendly write!

C.C Bloomsfield May 31, 2011 at 2:18 AM The sylph will always go to her lover..beautiful,sentimental is the word!

Red Fiery May 30, 2011 at 5:39 PM omg ! Superb . Truly romantic write . 7/7 for sure !

Nette Onclaud May 30, 2011 at 3:49 AM rawwwr! reaching new heights, here, james!!could you critique my monopoly piece?? it's a rather different one... love this piece! :) hugggs,nette

Wilma Neels May 29, 2011 at 12:20 PM Woo wee, I need to go stand outside in the rain hehe, jk James, love this!!! love Wilma

Poet Destroyer A May 29, 2011 at 8:45 AM James, the love and falling are extremely like a romantic book... they way one wants to be wanted after not thinking it will ever happen again.. boom!! A passion of heat to die for... enjoyed...p.d. James Peranteau June 1, 2021 at 9:51 PM You were only supposed to be tickled by my writes hon, not understand them...banter banter miss you see you later...much love 10yearz later...lol, james

Manouchka Doreus May 29, 2011 at 4:25 AM beautiful... so romantic

James Foulk May 28, 2011 at 10:36 AM a great piece, really enjoyed reading this most creative piece of fine poetry. thank you for commenting on Dear Sister.

Carrie Richards May 27, 2011 at 6:25 PM Whew...it's hot in here...LOL !! ps...Soup Mail

Daver Austin May 27, 2011 at 3:51 PM I hope you have recovered from your "collapse," dear James. How's she doin'? LOve, daver

Joseph Osita May 27, 2011 at 3:38 PM I enjoyed reading this poem.Best wishes!

Andrea Dietrich May 27, 2011 at 1:15 PM hmmm, a double meaning I see here? Good one from you, James.

Laura Breidenthal May 27, 2011 at 1:04 PM I enjoyed reading your poem. It is so short and yet complex in a way. I love it!