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Distante

The fairest of seas surrounding me; Nor clouds, nor breeze binding me; Yet I'm bound on this ship and alone: The void prevalent has left me forlorn... I sail from strained waters to land; Yet I despair in faith's hand; But for now, I'm stranded here-- Like a soldier disbanded here; I try to raise the sails to motion And hope to see a little shore... Yet I feel, in a dreary fashion, I try but I can do no more... What grudge have ye against me, winds? Bluest water, for what cause Dost thou stay me down upon Whilst my vessel's gathering moss? Answer, I demand of thee (yet no sound): Nor stirring of water, nor sight of ground; Yet I try to move in naught; Yet, this courage in me has brought-- Fresh yearning brought to my sinew: To the limbs, a vigor of new, To try myself to advance, Rather than to hold-on askance-- Who's to say another league, Could free me from this other realm...

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Date: 3/13/2011 1:25:00 PM
Enjoyed..Congratulations on going through the first round...Sara
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Date: 3/9/2011 3:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Akash. Love Carol
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Date: 3/7/2011 11:27:00 AM
A beautiful poem to win the semi finals. Congratulations. Mohammad
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Date: 12/7/2010 8:42:00 AM
Congratulations Akash on your excellent poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/24/2010 3:38:00 PM
Very nice monologue you have penned so well with the different forces of nature, Akash
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