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Distant Thoughts

Distant Thoughts If I had only took the time Such subtle thoughts run through my mind If I had planted seeds of hope If I had listen to each word you spoke If I had thrown caution to the wind If I had my life to live again Would seeds bloom dreams into reality Would words give wisdom and inspire me Would winds shift my path to a new destiny The life I live what would it be If I nourish my garden, is there still time For things you’ve said are clear in my mind Blow wind and reveal what I need to see Lead me to the place designed for me I sit and wonder I stare and gaze Just how to escape this cloudy maze If I had only lived as I was taught These things would not be just a Distant Thought.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/8/2014 8:17:00 PM
PATRICIA, Congrats on, Isaiah's "Distant Thought" contest. AWESOME WIN.......LUV* LINDA
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Date: 6/3/2014 3:15:00 PM
Wonderful writing Patricia. Many congrats on your win. Lainie
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Patricia Mitchell
Date: 6/9/2014 9:27:00 AM
Thanks Elaine
Date: 6/1/2014 1:42:00 PM
wonderful write Patricia,congrats well deserved,well earned,lovely
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Patricia Mitchell
Date: 6/9/2014 9:28:00 AM
Thanks Richard!
Date: 6/1/2014 1:04:00 PM
Congrats. BG
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Patricia Mitchell
Date: 6/9/2014 9:28:00 AM
Thanks again Barbara
Date: 6/1/2014 2:09:00 AM
Congrats on the win for distant thoughts, Patricia
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Patricia Mitchell
Date: 6/9/2014 9:28:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 6/1/2014 12:09:00 AM
congrats on your win! thoughtful write.
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Patricia Mitchell
Date: 6/9/2014 9:29:00 AM
Thanks Kiran
Date: 5/29/2014 9:15:00 PM
Very nice and enjoyable piece... LJ
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Patricia Mitchell
Date: 6/9/2014 9:29:00 AM
Thanks LJ
Date: 5/29/2014 5:40:00 PM
This is very good Patricia, i think all those "what ifs" is something we all go thru, good luck in the contest , blessings Carl
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Patricia Mitchell
Date: 6/9/2014 9:30:00 AM
Thanks Carl
Date: 5/29/2014 3:55:00 PM
wow, good job. This is so well written. I think you have a winner here. BG
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Patricia Mitchell
Date: 6/9/2014 9:27:00 AM
Thanks Barbara

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