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Distant Things

I think of distant things and start to cry. Why must my heart be grieved by many miles? To place where I was born, I will not fly, for I don't want to lose remembered smiles. The land which I have loved has changed, and now it does not bear the mark of honored grace. I must be covered, and I don't know how to hold back tears from streaming down my face. Where is the school? Where is the gentle stream? With what audacity did they assume that they could confiscate our land, our dream? They took and now our sorrow does consume. Where is the pool? Where are the orchards fine? Remembered are the times we'd swim and play We'd feast on all the fruits and feel sublime No one to harm or take our voice away My country now is not a place to be For freedom is no longer part of life Were I to go, the weight would burden me And I would weep with thoughts of all the strife So distant from my heart my land remains A land that in the sacred Word is praised My childhood memories, this land contains It's flag of freedom in my heart is raised For the Distant Things Contest Sponsor: John Lawless June 12, 2016

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Date: 9/9/2016 1:47:00 AM
Both matter and manner of the poem prove your skill of writing, Eileen.
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Date: 8/21/2016 6:40:00 AM
So touched by these memories, Eileen. As you rightly say, it's best not to spoil them by going back and having to face reality. ~ Hope you are keeping well; hugs // paul
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Date: 7/24/2016 9:56:00 AM
Well written!
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Date: 7/10/2016 1:42:00 PM
This is beautiful, Eileen... very touching piece. Your memories will always remain.
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Date: 6/20/2016 6:14:00 AM
This is absolutely brilliant. Well done.
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Date: 6/20/2016 5:03:00 AM
Congrats well written good work x
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Date: 6/13/2016 8:48:00 AM
Congrats Eileen, for your placement in the contest with this awesome piece!! ;-)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/13/2016 10:55:00 AM
Thank you, Teddy. :) Tenth placement....oh well. At least I tried. Hugs
Date: 6/13/2016 4:39:00 AM
Hello Eileen, Congratulations!! This a most excellent "IP" write in blank verse for sure. The message and obvious passion of this write are front and center for the reader. Outstanding Work!! 7/FAV absolutely!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/13/2016 10:55:00 AM
I'm glad you liked it, Gary. I have not been back home since 1979....It's sad. Thanks for the visit. Hugs
Date: 6/12/2016 7:07:00 PM
Congratulations Eileen, a fine effort deserving honors...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/13/2016 10:56:00 AM
Thanks, Charlie....I appreciate the visit. Hugs
Date: 6/12/2016 5:37:00 PM
yayyy, we both made it on the list!!! congrats to you, Eileen. I just hoped it would be a winner.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/13/2016 10:56:00 AM
Thanks, sweetie. Just barely got in. :) Hugs
Date: 6/12/2016 5:17:00 PM
Well done Eileen. Perfect form and a heartfelt longing for home and its memories. Thank you for participating in the contest
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/13/2016 10:58:00 AM
Thank you, John. My childhood memories are so perfect that I would never want to go back and ruin them. It hurts that that part of my life is a closed chapter. Hugs
Date: 6/11/2016 7:14:00 PM
flawless blank verse. It's so good to see poetry of someone who understands what iambic pentameter truly means!! furthermore, the context of this poem is just so good, Eileen. I was thinking your country had more freedoms than before. Is this written for how it used to be or is now this way? Just curious. I think John is going to love this one.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/13/2016 10:59:00 AM
Hi, Andrea...Thanks for visit. I can't say more about the situation of my country at present. I haven't been back hone since 1979....before the revolution. It is a beautiful country, but....I have no desire for the wonderful childhood memories to be erased by the harsh realities. Thanks for the visit.
Date: 6/11/2016 6:39:00 PM
This is moving Eileen, it is a shame that people have destroyed what once was so perfect. Hugs Rick.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/13/2016 11:02:00 AM
Yes....they have taken what is not theirs to take. The compound I lived in was owned by our church and it was a little piece of paradise. We had a high wall all around the campus. My dad was the principal of the boys' school which was on campus. We had a pool and in the summer time, we'd hardly ever wear clothes. We'd be swimming all day. We had so many different fruit trees like walnut, apple, apricot, plum, cherry, mulberry...white and pink. It was divine. Honestly...It would snow in the winter time...my brothers would jump of the roof into the snow. It was magical...My heart aches.
Date: 6/11/2016 5:07:00 PM
This is so sad, Eileen. You did a wonderful job of expressing your pain through your words. God Bless! Love, Kim
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/13/2016 11:03:00 AM
Thanks, dear. Sometimes it is good to give voice the feelings that lay dormant. I'm blessed by your visit. Hugs
Date: 6/11/2016 12:19:00 PM
You will always have such precious memories of you homeland Eileen - such a heartbreaking scenario. Thankfully many of have never had to experience what you and your country have been though :-) hugs Jan xx7
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/11/2016 12:23:00 PM
Thank you, sweetie. I'm glad that this poem touched your heart. This could apply to both places that are part of my heritage. I cannot write more...I only hope others don't have an ache in their hearts for places they can no longer go.....Hugs

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