Distant Shores Iii

I walk away from the bungalow, sand in my toes
I try to forget you, all the hurt and my woes
Life seems unfair at times, it doesn’t make sense
I thought you loved me, it must have been pretense

I walk along the rocky cliff as I start to head back 
As I peer over the cliff the water looks so black
Feeling depressed, I want to jump into the water
My life has been so crazy, would it really matter?

I get closer to the edge and I hear someone yelling
I feel large arms pull me away, it is so compelling
A beautiful man has a hold of me and doesn’t let go
He said I could have been killed, as if I didn’t really know

He grabbed my hands and led me down the rocks
He asked if we could sit, try to relax and have a talk
I said no, and started to argue with some heated strife
He smiled, as he said I would since he just saved my life

We walked to our cars, weirdly parked so close
He said his name is Frank and lives here on the coast
He said he lives alone and wants to bring me there
I agreed, not really caring about myself to have any fear

8/11/19

Contest: Writing Challenge 1, August 2019 - Just Write

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Mcconnell Avatar
July 5, 2020 at 1:49 PM
Great piece of story telling Tania, showing lovely rhyme and flow too. Really enjoyed this one looking forward to the sequel!! Blessings,Gordon
Kitchin Avatar
July 5, 2020 at 3:02 PM
Thank you Gordon, there is a sequel, "Distant Shores - The Final Chapter" on my page posted.
Rees Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 10:03 AM
You can't leave me in suspense. Is there a sequel to this intriguing story ? Very nicely written.
Kitchin Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 11:36 AM
Thank you Peter, I am working on a final part.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 9:09 AM
Intriguing, the cliff dive may end up being preferable.
Kitchin Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 4:41 AM
Thanks for stopping by, stay tuned! :)
Cunningham Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 5:33 AM
Back with congrats Tania. Tom
Kitchin Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 4:43 PM
Thank you Tom! :)
La France Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 7:38 PM
Tania congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write
Kitchin Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 4:38 AM
Thank you Constance and thank you for my placement in your contest!
Mcgee Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 8:51 AM
I love how you flowed with this and the others. Good luck in the contest.
Mcgee Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 7:52 PM
Congrats on your win! Woohoo
Kitchin Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 9:57 AM
Thank you Jeanne! :)
Cunningham Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 7:27 AM
A nice romantic ending to your trilogy Tanya. Good luck. Tom.
Kitchin Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 7:28 AM
Thank you Tom, I think I will keep adding to it, I really enjoy it! :)
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