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Distant Rumblings A distant rumbling slowly turns unwary heads, anticipation’s curtsy awaiting stillness. Homage before the deluge. The delicate staccato, of clouded future, cold touch, a victor’s mercy, counting coup on flower beds. 7/18/2016 submitted to – Compose a Choka – Poetry Contest sponsor – Janis Thompson
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