Edward Ibeh Poet Narrative

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Disrobing Ego Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Unseeking Seeker. Date written: 07/17/2026

Disrobing Ego

smugly standing atop
his pinnacle of conceit,
his false bravado masks his deceit.
he dared alone
to be the ruler of the firmament.
his swollen pride, he donned
like an armor
in a bright afternoon sun
and mocked shadows under his feet.
he's convinced himself
he's the conqueror
of all battles he fought.
his grand illusion complete,
or so he thought; seasons change
and towers constructed in air
cannot stand winter's fury.
gale force winds
strip his crass arrogance naked -
no diadem could spare him
from a looming storm
his manufactured glee eroded
by a cold harsh reality.
his ego disrobed
as he realized
how small of a man he is;
cut down to size
as he watched his empire crumble.
no longer who he once was,
but grateful for the stillness
it created.

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Sotto Poet August 2, 2026 at 10:33 AM Dear Edward, my heartfelt congrats on winning the contest. Your lovely poem, "Disrobing Ego" was a delight to read. Your amazing imagery, as well as the incredible metaphor layers, create a strong emotional sensory experience that stays with the reader for a long time. The ending you wrote is really amazing. Edward Ibeh August 2, 2026 at 4:36 PM Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback and congratulations, Lasaad🙏 Most obliged.

Karen Jones August 2, 2026 at 2:41 AM Congratulations on your thought provoking poem’s win Edward! Edward Ibeh August 2, 2026 at 4:35 PM Thank you very much, Karen🙏

Ink Empress July 18, 2026 at 1:45 AM This is such a profound write dear EI! I am loving the flow of storytelling here, so well woven for the prompt! And the last line ~ it hits deep and will remain within me! Definitely a new fave ~ best wishes: Sending you light always Edward Ibeh July 18, 2026 at 6:08 AM As always, many thanks for the support and fave, Inky:-) Most obliged, my friend.

Alison A Smith July 18, 2026 at 12:56 AM And so falls those whose ego is so inflated its a wonder they dont think they can fly. Edward Ibeh July 18, 2026 at 6:06 AM True indeed! Thanks for dropping by, Alison:-)

I Am Anaya July 17, 2026 at 3:23 PM Dark like the kings who have reigned, how apropos for today's events. Deeply drawn from your pen. Immensely enjoyed! Edward Ibeh July 18, 2026 at 6:05 AM Thank you very much, Anaya;-) I'm glad you did, my friend.