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Disremembered Sins

I stood before the pearly gates Awaiting entrance in, Unaware of impediments To bar my entering, Then they came back to haunt me, My disremembered sins.

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Constance La France

Date: 9/3/2019 3:44:00 PM

Gary, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful poem in Couplet, I admit this is something I have thought of !

Gary Smith
Date: 9/3/2019 3:58:00 PM

Thank you Dear Heart. :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/2/2019 5:37:00 PM

You and me both Gary - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Gary Smith
Date: 9/2/2019 5:46:00 PM

Lol, thank you Jan. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/2/2019 12:58:00 PM

- Power in your few words, congratulations on your win, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Smith
Date: 9/2/2019 1:47:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise. :)

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/2/2019 11:17:00 AM

Gary congratulations on your win!;)

Gary Smith
Date: 9/2/2019 1:52:00 PM

Thank you Brenda. :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/1/2019 9:35:00 AM

Ah, poetic justice in poetry form. This will appeal to the judge for sure!

Gary Smith
Date: 9/1/2019 9:48:00 AM

Thank you Caren. :)