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Disremembered Sins

I stood before the pearly gates
Awaiting entrance in,

Unaware of impediments 
To bar my entering,

Then they came back to haunt me,
My disremembered sins.

Copyright © Gary Smith | Year Posted 2019

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Constance La France

September 3, 2019 at 3:44 PM

Gary, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful poem in Couplet, I admit this is something I have thought of !

September 3, 2019 at 3:58 PM

Thank you Dear Heart. :)

September 2, 2019 at 5:37 PM

You and me both Gary - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

September 2, 2019 at 5:46 PM

Lol, thank you Jan. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 2, 2019 at 12:58 PM

- Power in your few words, congratulations on your win, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

September 2, 2019 at 1:47 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise. :)

September 2, 2019 at 11:17 AM

Gary congratulations on your win!;)

September 2, 2019 at 1:52 PM

Thank you Brenda. :)

Caren Krutsinger

September 1, 2019 at 9:35 AM

Ah, poetic justice in poetry form. This will appeal to the judge for sure!

September 1, 2019 at 9:48 AM

Thank you Caren. :)

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