Emile Pinet Poet Monorhyme

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Disposable Love

Euphoric embrace, feelings rare
exquisite night, hypnotic air.
Relinquished will, impulsive dare
intimate thoughts, emotions flare.

Burning desire, entangled pair
scrumptious kisses, bittersweet snare.
Passionate vows, dreamers declare
forever faithful, lovers swear.

Sensual whispers, sweethearts blare
spinning magic, memories share.
Reality stings, lies prepare
truth interprets, wishes compare.

Lingering doubts, fuel despair
torrential tears, forgotten care.
Faltering dreams, bewildered stare
disposable love, Cupid's lair.


(Monorhyme)


3/12/2017

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Susan Ashley August 27, 2021 at 9:49 AM Dear Emile, your beautiful poem brings one from the peak of ecstasy to the pit of despair.. Cupid's liar is so apropos - loved that! Rich with imagery and emotions and expressed with awesome rhymes. Congratulations on your excellent win in William's contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan Emile Pinet August 27, 2021 at 10:40 AM Thank you, Susan, you honor me my friend, Emile.

Sigrid Ermine August 24, 2021 at 3:33 PM Hi Emile. A pleasure to study your neat, wise, soulful work. A roller-coaster poem, without fluff or waste, brilliantly depicted! Emile Pinet August 25, 2021 at 7:19 AM Thanks so much, Sigrid, your comments are always welcomed and appreciated my friend, Emile.

Jeanne Mcgee August 23, 2021 at 11:20 AM This is magic! What a wonderful monorhyme Emile. Congrats on your win. Emile Pinet August 24, 2021 at 1:50 PM Thanks, Jeanne, your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.

William Kelii Kekaula August 20, 2021 at 8:22 PM An admirable line, "Reality stings, lies prepare". A harbinger presents as tides turn, proffering the title its origins. A hearty thanks, Emile, for sharing your unsurpassable talents, Aloha! Emile Pinet August 21, 2021 at 7:55 AM Thanks, William, you honor me, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Line Gauthier May 15, 2018 at 8:07 PM Fine poem about how disappointments in love hurt very deep. Emile Pinet May 16, 2018 at 8:42 AM Thank you so much Line, your comments are most appreciated my friend, Emile.

Sofia Ra March 21, 2017 at 2:17 PM wow so very true. love starts with such explosive feeling, and sometimes can be so painful. Your poem captures this beautifully. Emile Pinet March 21, 2017 at 2:51 PM Thank you so much Sofia, your comments are most appreciated, Emile.

Andrea Dietrich March 15, 2017 at 3:42 PM GREAT take on the theme, Emile, and awesome monorhyming. Emile Pinet March 21, 2017 at 2:50 PM Thanks Andrea, your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.

Richard Lamoureux March 14, 2017 at 8:12 AM Very effective use of rhyme Emile! Worthy of a 7. Emile Pinet March 14, 2017 at 8:53 AM Thanks Richard, your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.

Carole Duet March 14, 2017 at 12:23 AM Great monorhyme...with an awsome story line...with a love "too hot not to burn out". Emile Pinet March 14, 2017 at 8:52 AM Thank you so much Carole, your comments are most appreciated, Emile.

Heidi Sands March 12, 2017 at 10:32 AM Wow Emile. This reads so smoothly , very well done :) Emile Pinet March 12, 2017 at 11:56 AM Thank you so much Heidi, your comments are most appreciated, Emile.