Disposable Love

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Euphoric embrace, feelings rare exquisite night, hypnotic air. Relinquished will, impulsive dare intimate thoughts, emotions flare. Burning desire, entangled pair scrumptious kisses, bittersweet snare. Passionate vows, dreamers declare forever faithful, lovers swear. Sensual whispers, sweethearts blare spinning magic, memories share. Reality stings, lies prepare truth interprets, wishes compare. Lingering doubts, fuel despair torrential tears, forgotten care. Faltering dreams, bewildered stare disposable love, Cupid's lair. (Monorhyme) 3/12/2017

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Susan Ashley

Date: 8/27/2021 9:49:00 AM

Dear Emile, your beautiful poem brings one from the peak of ecstasy to the pit of despair.. Cupid's liar is so apropos - loved that! Rich with imagery and emotions and expressed with awesome rhymes. Congratulations on your excellent win in William's contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/27/2021 10:40:00 AM

Thank you, Susan, you honor me my friend, Emile.

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 8/24/2021 3:33:00 PM

Hi Emile. A pleasure to study your neat, wise, soulful work. A roller-coaster poem, without fluff or waste, brilliantly depicted!

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/25/2021 7:19:00 AM

Thanks so much, Sigrid, your comments are always welcomed and appreciated my friend, Emile.

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 8/23/2021 11:20:00 AM

This is magic! What a wonderful monorhyme Emile. Congrats on your win.

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/24/2021 1:50:00 PM

Thanks, Jeanne, your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.

Hilo Poet

Date: 8/20/2021 8:22:00 PM

An admirable line, "Reality stings, lies prepare". A harbinger presents as tides turn, proffering the title its origins. A hearty thanks, Emile, for sharing your unsurpassable talents, Aloha!

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/21/2021 7:55:00 AM

Thanks, William, you honor me, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.