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Dispersal

dandelion seeds - dreams gone with the wind	


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Contest: One Line Poem 	
Sponsor: Silent One
Placed 2nd

destinymonoku

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Teddy Kimathi

July 22, 2016 at 7:43 AM

Your short line speaks volumes!!! Congrats Paul, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)

Paul Callus

July 22, 2016 at 10:34 AM

I am glad that you like it, Teddy:) Thank you...regards // paul

Sara Kendrick

July 20, 2016 at 7:43 AM

One liners so unique are the ones upon the winners’ page..Glad to see you there..Congrats..Sara

Paul Callus

July 20, 2016 at 5:01 PM

Thank you Sara; I have just read your winning entry....very wise reasoning! Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

July 19, 2016 at 2:57 PM

Just now seeing your reply to me on my last comment here. I have a dandelion etheree with a theme just like this one. that's why I love this one so much. Congrats on the win

Paul Callus

July 19, 2016 at 3:21 PM

Thank you, Andrea. Your "Best Monoku" was amongst the best!! pity it was not granted its due merit! Regards // paul

Alexis Y.

July 18, 2016 at 2:56 PM

Hi Paul, Congrats on your 2nd place win it was well deserved: -) Alexis

Paul Callus

July 19, 2016 at 1:39 PM

Many thanks, Alexis:) I truly enjoyed your winning entry, too! Regards // paul

Jesse Day

July 18, 2016 at 12:07 AM

Congrats on your win in the One-Liner Contest! Jesse

Paul Callus

July 18, 2016 at 2:26 PM

Pleased to have you stopping by, Jesse; thank you. Regards // paul

Charlie Smith

July 17, 2016 at 9:14 PM

Great job Paul, congratulations

Paul Callus

July 18, 2016 at 2:25 PM

Thank you, Charlie! You did very well, yourself!! // paul

Sandra Haight

July 17, 2016 at 6:53 PM

Great metaphor, Paul! Congrats on your placement in the one-liner contest! 7 Sandra

Paul Callus

July 18, 2016 at 2:23 PM

Thank you Sandra; both the comments and high rating are appreciated. Regards // paul

Jan Allison

July 17, 2016 at 6:00 PM

would have loved to see this at number 1 Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

July 18, 2016 at 2:22 PM

You're very kind, Jan:) Thank you! I have visited your winning entry, and I can assure you that you merited a much higher placing; not easy to judge so many entries in a short time! hugs // paul

Beautiful Scars

July 17, 2016 at 5:44 PM

Paul, this is great!congrats on your placement in the one liner contest :)-luloo

Paul Callus

July 18, 2016 at 1:52 PM

Thank you Laura; your 'harmony' entry has served you well, too:) Regards // paul

Skat A

July 17, 2016 at 4:55 PM

Paul, Congratulations on this awesome list of one line winners. Have a happy day **SKAT**

Paul Callus

July 18, 2016 at 1:01 PM

Thank you, Skat. Hope you're having a lovely Monday, too! ~ Regards // paul

Michael Whatley

January 29, 2016 at 7:20 AM

Incomprehensibly inspiring visions sparked from this one-liner! Great Monoku, Paul.

Paul Callus

January 29, 2016 at 12:59 PM

I am pleased that you liked it, Michael; thank you for the lovely comments. ~ Regards // paul

White Sage

January 28, 2016 at 4:58 AM

well penned monoku there Paul, best of luck in the contest

Paul Callus

January 28, 2016 at 8:44 AM

Thank you for reading and liking, WS! ~ All the best. // paul

Richard Lamoureux

January 27, 2016 at 10:27 AM

Very effective line. May the wind carry a world of dreams to your garden and may they be transformed into many beautiful flowers.

Paul Callus

January 27, 2016 at 11:25 AM

Many thanks Richard. Love your feedback:) ~ All the best. // paul

Emile Pinet

January 27, 2016 at 8:39 AM

Nice work Paul, this poem is innovative, captivating and three dimensional in character. Emile.

Paul Callus

January 27, 2016 at 11:24 AM

Thank you Emile. I see that you noted that 'gone with the wind' has a double significance. ~ Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

January 27, 2016 at 1:03 AM

I love this entry Paul! #7

Paul Callus

January 27, 2016 at 11:10 AM

Thank you Connie! I appreciate both visit and the high rating. ~ Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

January 26, 2016 at 4:01 PM

Wonderful, Paul!

Paul Callus

January 27, 2016 at 9:59 AM

Thank you Andrea:) Could be that one of my dandelion seeds has passed your way! ~ paul

Nette Onclaud

January 26, 2016 at 12:47 PM

ohh my, so visual with great twist in the end, paul !... huggs

Paul Callus

January 27, 2016 at 9:33 AM

Thank you for the lovely and encouraging comments, Nette:) ~ Hugs // paul

Sara Kendrick

January 26, 2016 at 7:53 AM

Good idea to use the dandelion in this context..I found some humor in this even though I am sure that was not meant..I think that it is because there is no telling where the seeds of a dream will land and what they will produce..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Paul Callus

January 27, 2016 at 9:32 AM

Thank you for the feedback, Sara. I agree with your musing:) ~ Regards // paul