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Disintegrating

I      feel    like     a    rose      whose          petals
       Are    falling one     after          the    other;
I   am   wrecked       like     a  star       nearing
              A black-hole,  since      when      you   left me
 Whole, only      to      break         apart…….

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Charlie Smith

Date: 2/11/2018 11:58:00 AM

Seems like I've read this before??? Now I remember why I congratulated you before Teddy...

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/9/2018 9:08:00 AM

CONGRATS on your win, Teddy! Janice

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/9/2018 8:39:00 AM

Congrats, Teddy. Very effective presentation. Enjoyed your poem.

Charlie Smith

Date: 5/5/2017 9:42:00 AM

Ok then, congratulations...

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/7/2017 2:14:00 AM

Hehe. Thank you so much Charles, for your kind applause!! ;-)

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 5/3/2017 8:53:00 AM

Congratulations Teddy on winning the MAY DAY PREMIER contest!!! I hope to see more of your poems in the future for I truly enjoy your works. Keep up the good work :) -HANS

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/7/2017 2:04:00 AM

Hi HANS. Thanks you so much for reading and enjoying my work!! :-) You'll definitely see more of my work soon....

Kim Van Breda

Date: 10/18/2014 11:01:00 AM

Cool poem Teddy. I love the format. My husband buys me Roses once in a blue moon, and it is always so sad , when it gets to the stage where they start shedding their petals--- I keep the roses remains in bowls Xx~Xx

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/20/2014 11:38:00 PM

You are poetic in real life too, Breda! Hopefully, he'll feel something if he sees the rose remains that you keep..... Thank you for loving my poem! ^_^ <3