Teddy Kimathi Poet Free verse

Disintegrating

I      feel    like     a    rose      whose          petals
       Are    falling one     after          the    other;
I   am   wrecked       like     a  star       nearing
              A black-hole,  since      when      you   left me
 Whole, only      to      break         apart…….

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Charlie Smith February 11, 2018 at 11:58 AM Seems like I've read this before??? Now I remember why I congratulated you before Teddy...

Janice Canerdy February 9, 2018 at 9:08 AM CONGRATS on your win, Teddy! Janice

Line Gauthier February 9, 2018 at 8:39 AM Congrats, Teddy. Very effective presentation. Enjoyed your poem.

Charlie Smith May 5, 2017 at 9:42 AM Ok then, congratulations... Teddy Kimathi May 7, 2017 at 2:14 AM Hehe. Thank you so much Charles, for your kind applause!! ;-)

Hansteven Selfa May 3, 2017 at 8:53 AM Congratulations Teddy on winning the MAY DAY PREMIER contest!!! I hope to see more of your poems in the future for I truly enjoy your works. Keep up the good work :) -HANS Teddy Kimathi May 7, 2017 at 2:04 AM Hi HANS. Thanks you so much for reading and enjoying my work!! :-) You'll definitely see more of my work soon....

Kim Van Breda October 18, 2014 at 11:01 AM Cool poem Teddy. I love the format. My husband buys me Roses once in a blue moon, and it is always so sad , when it gets to the stage where they start shedding their petals--- I keep the roses remains in bowls Xx~Xx Teddy Kimathi October 20, 2014 at 11:38 PM You are poetic in real life too, Breda! Hopefully, he'll feel something if he sees the rose remains that you keep..... Thank you for loving my poem! ^_^ <3

Doris Jamoner October 17, 2014 at 12:30 PM Congratz on your win! ^^ Teddy Kimathi October 18, 2014 at 2:24 AM Thanks for your applause Doris! ^_^

Kayod5 Kayode October 16, 2014 at 8:52 AM It is nice to see this super one on the winning list,congrats Teddy. Teddy Kimathi October 16, 2014 at 11:47 PM Hi Kayode. Thank you for appreciating my work and applauding me! :-)

Dr.Ram Mehta October 16, 2014 at 5:51 AM Nicely penned poem, congrats on the win, Teddy Teddy Kimathi October 16, 2014 at 7:18 AM Thank you so much Dr. Ram Mehta! :-)

Judy Konos October 15, 2014 at 11:49 PM No bad writers in this contest! You were fast, furious, humorous, romantic,lost, found, sought after, wondrous! THANKS FOR ENTERING! I'M HAPPY! Teddy Kimathi October 16, 2014 at 5:10 AM Welcome Judy! ^_^ I'm glad and humbled to get your welcoming in your contest! Lol. I didn't realize that my work had all these characterisitcs.....