Disinheritance

come close my penultimate breath beckons thee ~ last one i spit on ye

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/8/2022 11:09:00 PM

And died happy lol. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/9/2022 1:25:00 AM

One dies happy whilst the other lives unhappy, probably without the Will to live cheers David

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed

Date: 1/8/2022 4:28:00 PM

So powerful! this is my reaction, don't know if its a wrong one! but your pen of Monoku slices with force! Thanks - Marshall

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/9/2022 1:22:00 AM

Your observation is correct Marshall, but the explanation is for one’s imagination, cheers David

Jan Allison

Date: 1/8/2022 3:38:00 PM

I can relate big time, stab in the back more than spit lol hugs Jan xx

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/8/2022 3:45:00 PM

I’ve heard so many stories of good honest family members, getting squat, whilst ones that do squat get everything, what’s going on?? Cheers David