Disillusioned Sonnet

the joy of others, my cage
accomplishment of peers, my regret
adventures of folk, my envy
spoils of my life, my dream
romance, my anguish
darkness of society, my worry
scarcity of kindness, my nightmare
life is but a test—
most fail it
we thrive in its agony.
yet dawn arrives for those who cannot see,
its light rejected by unwilling eyes.
we mourn the chains we never dared to break,
and call our prison home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Lane Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 4:07 AM
You seem to live in a dark place and thats rather sad. Hopefully, it’s just the nature of your muse and not your attitude about life.
Velasco Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 3:28 PM
A powerful and honest reflection on envy, despair, and self-made limits. The ending carries a strong message about breaking free from the cages we create. Keep transforming pain into meaningful poetry.
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