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Disillusioned


Disillusioned
broken promises,
goodbye my love,
sorrow filled darkness awaits,
unenchanted.



05/25/2017

heartbreakcinquain

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Eileen Manassian

August 6, 2017 at 3:44 AM

OH...what a sad write. Disenchantment is the worst thing that can happen. Sending hugs

James Inman

August 6, 2017 at 11:11 AM

Hi Eileen, thank you for your visit. Endings are never pleasant.

Samiha Zubair

June 10, 2017 at 8:03 AM

To complete by filling in the blanks is really your quality deservingly flaunted by you

James Inman

June 11, 2017 at 6:33 AM

Thanks for the visit Samiha.

Paul Callus

June 2, 2017 at 5:08 PM

I see that you chose a word cinquain, James; very well executed; the content sad and expressive. Congrats on your podium finish. Regards // paul

James Inman

June 2, 2017 at 7:05 PM

Thank you Paul.

Maria Williams

June 2, 2017 at 2:40 AM

Oh! another placing, congratulations James.

James Inman

June 2, 2017 at 7:04 PM

Thank you Maria.

Jan Allison

May 31, 2017 at 5:16 PM

oh a dark and sad poem James congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

James Inman

May 31, 2017 at 7:12 PM

Thank you Jan.

Dean Wood

May 31, 2017 at 8:11 AM

I like what you have done with this James. Well done! Congratulations!

James Inman

May 31, 2017 at 11:29 AM

Thanks Dean.

Reason A. Poteet

May 31, 2017 at 6:38 AM

I wouldn't want to get this message written on a card from someone I love, Congratulations, it is a message too often sent in haste, and written well. Kudos on your placement.

James Inman

May 31, 2017 at 11:29 AM

Thank you.

John Anderson

May 31, 2017 at 1:10 AM

Congratulations with your Second Place in the Cinquain contest. A delightful poem that shows what the form is about, especially the last line. Very well done. Cheers,

James Inman

May 31, 2017 at 2:26 AM

Thank you John, for the inspiration and taking the time to host this contest. I enjoyed writing for it.