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Disillusioned

Disillusioned broken promises, goodbye my love, sorrow filled darkness awaits, unenchanted. 05/25/2017

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/6/2017 3:44:00 AM

OH...what a sad write. Disenchantment is the worst thing that can happen. Sending hugs

James Inman
Date: 8/6/2017 11:11:00 AM

Hi Eileen, thank you for your visit. Endings are never pleasant.

Samiha Zubair

Date: 6/10/2017 8:03:00 AM

To complete by filling in the blanks is really your quality deservingly flaunted by you

James Inman
Date: 6/11/2017 6:33:00 AM

Thanks for the visit Samiha.

Paul Callus

Date: 6/2/2017 5:08:00 PM

I see that you chose a word cinquain, James; very well executed; the content sad and expressive. Congrats on your podium finish. Regards // paul

James Inman
Date: 6/2/2017 7:05:00 PM

Thank you Paul.

Maria Williams

Date: 6/2/2017 2:40:00 AM

Oh! another placing, congratulations James.

James Inman
Date: 6/2/2017 7:04:00 PM

Thank you Maria.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/31/2017 5:16:00 PM

oh a dark and sad poem James congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

James Inman
Date: 5/31/2017 7:12:00 PM

Thank you Jan.

Dean Wood

Date: 5/31/2017 8:11:00 AM

I like what you have done with this James. Well done! Congratulations!

James Inman
Date: 5/31/2017 11:29:00 AM

Thanks Dean.

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 5/31/2017 6:38:00 AM

I wouldn't want to get this message written on a card from someone I love, Congratulations, it is a message too often sent in haste, and written well. Kudos on your placement.

James Inman
Date: 5/31/2017 11:29:00 AM

Thank you.

John Anderson

Date: 5/31/2017 1:10:00 AM

Congratulations with your Second Place in the Cinquain contest. A delightful poem that shows what the form is about, especially the last line. Very well done. Cheers,

James Inman
Date: 5/31/2017 2:26:00 AM

Thank you John, for the inspiration and taking the time to host this contest. I enjoyed writing for it.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/25/2017 9:28:00 AM

A sad cinquain, James, written skilfully:) hope you find the Light:) a 7:)

James Inman
Date: 5/25/2017 9:46:00 AM

Thanks for the visit Jo.