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Disillusioned

Entering into mazes and mists on trails veiled in vapor, Camouflaging strawmen speeches made of paper. A complex vortex of lies lying in lair, Welling, waiting, writhing, For spirits who dare enter there. Dare flirt with the folly of fending truth, With politicians so long in the tooth. Those who enter in, to their chagrin, Shocked by that slippery slope of sin. Shunned from the floor and ignored after asking why, Taken behind the rusting curtain and made to comply. Disillusioned now and to keep his place, Lose his conscience and double his face, Soliciting funds for the approaching race. To enter into mazes and mists on trails of vapor, Camouflaging strawmen speeches made of paper, A complex vortex of lies lying in lair, Welling, waiting, writhing, For spirits who dare...enter there.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/18/2010 3:11:00 PM
Wonderful poem, great write! take a look at my poems Peace and Love, and The Truth, i'm sure you'll like them, love Simone
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Date: 2/9/2010 4:17:00 PM
Good point! You would think we would learn by now!!! J
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Date: 2/4/2010 1:13:00 PM
Excellent depiction of the reality of politics
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Date: 2/3/2010 1:22:00 PM
HI, Robert, harmon's comment was kind of funny at the bottom here. I think the same, about being on different sides of the fence, however, we still feel pretty much the same about all the nasty politicians on both sides! they really suck nowadays, and I dream of a day we could have no special interest groups and no other malarky going on. I loved your words you used in that repeating stanza to express your disillusion. LUv, andera
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Date: 2/3/2010 10:19:00 AM
It has been a pleasure to read your ~~Magnificent~~poem today Robert. Thank you so much for posting and sharing it with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/3/2010 8:13:00 AM
Hey Robert, it is a sad situation. Many people are disillusioned, as we were before. I don't know when leaders will come to realize that they're put in office by a higher authority and it's not because of their credentials or their wealth. Great expression of your feelings in this write. Good job! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 2/3/2010 2:08:00 AM
An intriguing post, Robert. I dare say that even the best intentioned become quite confounded when they discover what is really going on behind the "rusting curtain" ...spell check, line 5 first stanza
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Date: 2/2/2010 6:05:00 PM
Robert: do u know how to submit a poem for a contest and not include your name on it?? Mac McGovern's new contest Anything Goes Again is requesting we submit an entry but without our name on it.. doesn't the site automatically attach your name to any poem u enter? can u help me with this one? thankxxx Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/2/2010 5:50:00 PM
I am such a news fanatic and keep myself posted with the "politics" these days... this poem is a great expression of exactly what is being dealt to the American citizens... luv your fancy words and great message ... did u get my yahoo mail?? luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/2/2010 5:40:00 PM
Politicians suck, lie, and if we understand what is going on we go crazy... I agree, but i bet we are on different sides of the fence. LOL
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