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Disheartened

Head downcast, left out No sign of happiness there Depressed, disheartened Sadness reigns within his mind Hurt man, a destroyed ego Russell Sivey

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/18/2012 12:27:00 PM

yes, you have depicted such a man with this tanka.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/18/2012 7:03:00 AM

intensity 8 on the richter scale, russell... a very stirring piece that make me ponder, wow...enjoyed the alliteration as well..:) huggs!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/18/2012 6:39:00 AM

Oh! I hope not..Great expressive and descriptive work..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/17/2012 11:11:00 PM

You certainly have portrayed the loneliness of a depressed man. I wish he could see what a wonderful world he has inherited from God. The turmoil is manmade and should not be. Thank you for your ever so kind comments about my poem. Love, Joyce