Disgruntled Mom and Her Stay-Inside Kids - Nursery Rhyme

Eight o’clock, Eight o’clock – Children, arise.
Out in the yard you can chase butterflies!

Nine o’clock, Nine o’clock – Children don’t dawdle!
You move like a duck who can’t even waddle.

Ten o’clock, Ten o’clock – Children it’s late!
Really, I haven’t all morning to wait.

Eleven o’clock – Kids, you have to get going.
Your kites I’ve got ready. A nice breeze is blowing.

Twelve o’clock, Twelve o’clock – Children, move fast.
Already you see the morning has passed.

One o’clock, One o’clock – Lunch we are eating.
Suggestions I made do not bear repeating.

Two o’clock, Two o’clock – Now you feel full?
Your little red wagon I’d promised to pull!

Three o’clock, Three o’clock – I said ASAP.
It looks like instead you are needing a nap!

Four o’clock, Four o’clock – STILL you’re inside?
To get you in sunshine I’ve tried and I’ve tried.

Five o’clock, Five o’clock – Dad’s almost home.
Why in the wonderful woods won’t you roam?

Six o’clock, Six o’clock – Soon will be dinner.
Each of you seems like a stay-inside winner.

Seven o’clock, and the sun has gone down.
Kids, can’t you see that your mom wears a frown?

Eight o’clock, eight o’clock – all that I needed
was time for myself. My words went unheeded.

Nine o’clock, nine o’clock – Time now for bed.
That story you wanted is not getting read!

March 15, 2021 
For Eve Roper's the ' Nursery Rhyme 3' Poetry Contest
(because I forgot to enter second one)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 4/7/2021 2:51:00 PM
What a fun poem, many congrats on your win Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/7/2021 11:32:00 AM
- Children love to count ... lovely poem ... congratulations on your win, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/6/2021 11:36:00 AM
This is so cute, Andrea! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/6/2021 6:47:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea, on your win. It doesn't matter if you forget to enter one or two of your poems. Your charming poems shine and mesmerize ! Love ~ Mala
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Date: 4/6/2021 1:14:00 AM
Such a fun way to learn about time! I enjoyed like a kid..Congratulations dear Andie!
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Date: 4/5/2021 10:47:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. Have a good evening:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/5/2021 10:30:00 PM
Andrea, great rhythm in this great nursery rhyme. Congratulations on your win. . Please join me at my blog Nursery Rhyme 3 Contest - Eve Roper's Blog (poetrysoup.com) Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/15/2021 1:51:00 PM
Oh how funny! Great humor poem!
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Date: 3/15/2021 1:00:00 PM
No story time, Very nicely penned Andrea..
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Date: 3/15/2021 11:35:00 AM
Fun to read feel for moms these days, two dogs is enough!!! Best of luck with contest!!!
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Date: 3/15/2021 8:48:00 AM
A good one, Andrea. It teaches kids how to count, too. A mom's exasperation shows through...and kids love that! Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 3/15/2021 7:42:00 AM
Bouncy tone to your lovely rhymes, Andrea. Much fun it would be for the kids to sing along.
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Date: 3/15/2021 6:33:00 AM
Hi Andrea, You've penned such a delightful “ nursery rhyme “ poem. It is so fitting for the age group. Best wishes for the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/15/2021 5:33:00 AM
Cute poem, Andrea. As a mother, I guess you knew what was coming at each hour of the day and night. Best wishes for a win in Eve's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 3/15/2021 4:28:00 AM
Today's mom are all dissatisfied with their children's behavior..Andrea... Great nursery rhyme and flow with the repetition of the time from morning eight to night nine o clock... Hugs.. ~ Ani
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Date: 3/15/2021 12:41:00 AM
Your nursery rhyme trips off in a lively manner. Pity no night story now.
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