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Disemvoweled

Heaving salty neck,
Pulse, raging like a river,
He will be home soon.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

December 3, 2012 at 6:10 AM

Congratulations on your super win in Charles' "Haiku" contest Luke. I am sorry this is a very late comment. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

November 27, 2012 at 9:35 PM

Luck, congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Keep the good verses coming... take care & good night :-) PD

Luke Irwin

November 28, 2012 at 6:43 AM

Thank you so much.

Daver Austin

November 27, 2012 at 9:47 AM

I think I would be absent. Congrats on the selection. daver

Andrea Dietrich

November 25, 2012 at 8:34 AM

I read beneath here that this was about a cheating spouse. That makes it much easier for me to understand and appreciate the description. congrats on your win, Luke.