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disemVOWeled

Heaving salty neck, Pulse, raging like a river, He will be home soon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/3/2012 6:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Charles' "Haiku" contest Luke. I am sorry this is a very late comment. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/27/2012 9:35:00 PM
Luck, congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Keep the good verses coming... take care & good night :-) PD
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Luke Irwin
Date: 11/28/2012 6:43:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 11/27/2012 9:47:00 AM
I think I would be absent. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 11/25/2012 8:34:00 AM
I read beneath here that this was about a cheating spouse. That makes it much easier for me to understand and appreciate the description. congrats on your win, Luke.
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Date: 11/24/2012 5:42:00 AM
Big congratulations on your win Luke, hugs xx
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Date: 11/23/2012 6:14:00 PM
Luck, congratulations with your haiku win,,, take care..pd
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Luke Irwin
Date: 11/23/2012 8:21:00 PM
Thank you so much.
Date: 11/21/2012 11:27:00 AM
Thanks Richard! Actually It's about a cheating spouse, hence the "VOW" in caps.
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Date: 11/21/2012 8:03:00 AM
Puppet?? I just thought you were a scary looking dude! Just kidding, very moving poem. Are you referring to a soldier?
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Date: 11/17/2012 7:29:00 PM
This gave me a lot of chilling images. Amazing haiku--greatly enjoyed Always, Laura
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Date: 11/16/2012 6:26:00 AM
Oie yoie, this sounds scary enough, Luke.:( I had found that puppet head creepy, but this verse tops it off. Keep well, Mikki
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Date: 11/12/2012 1:38:00 PM
Ok you have said well. Very enjoyed. Michael
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