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Discretion

As twilight falls The moon recalls Mischievous waves reverse motion Shores and shoals Surrender their souls Relent,giving back to the oceans Spent waters reveal Secrets concealed Yet somehow remain discreet Sands coming and going Oceans ebbing and flowing Taking some secrets dark and deep Barefoot lovers Hidden from others On the shoreline walk hand in hand Under the moon Impassioned love blooms Entangled they drop to the sand Clouds shrouding the light Make love in the night Their impetuous scene discreet Silent moon won't tell The ocean will swell At the bottom their secret will sleep an original poem by the "poemdog" Daniel Turner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/6/2016 3:18:00 PM
Smooth as sea glass on the shoreline. Barefoot lovers and silent moon rendezvous, it's grand.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 10/6/2016 3:37:00 PM
Thank you, just a different way to say the same thing, right. Cheers my dear. Thank you for reading:)
Date: 7/9/2016 9:22:00 AM
Congrats on your fine winning poem, great rhythm and rhyme.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/11/2016 9:32:00 AM
Thank you Seosamh. I appreciate your friendly visit and kind comments.
Date: 7/8/2016 4:45:00 PM
Smooth flow and rhyme - a light and lovely romantic write! Congrats, Daniel!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/11/2016 9:31:00 AM
Thank you Kim. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Date: 7/8/2016 4:25:00 AM
Congrats Daniel, for your placement with this fine piece!! ;-)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/11/2016 9:30:00 AM
Thank you Teddy. You are a kind and thoughtful person. I appreciate your kindness.
Date: 7/7/2016 1:43:00 PM
Daniel, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "PAIN GETS IN THE WAY OF FORGIVENESS" if you'd like..... Love LINDA
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/11/2016 9:29:00 AM
Hi Linda. Thank you for choosing this poem. Obviously it is one of my earlier writes which never got much attention. I appreciate your consideration.

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