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Discovery

For a week Jean was married to Jake,
Jean discovered that Jake was a snake,
At a shop now in town,
For sale a wedding gown,
With a note - worn once by mistake.

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Phyllis Babcock

August 25, 2015 at 5:59 PM

A big mistake it seems. You are so good at Limericks. love phyl

Lindsay Laurie

August 31, 2015 at 3:40 AM

I dunno Phyllis. I think we all have our own expressive talent for others to appreciate - Lindsay

Andrea Dietrich

May 18, 2015 at 10:38 PM

THis is just GREAT, you are a wonderful poet of humor~ oh, and about you thinking I could think of ways to spend my six months of life at a red light: yes, that is also the time I spend putting my make up on!!!

Lindsay Laurie

June 3, 2015 at 6:17 PM

G'day Andrea... its catch up day - apology for being late. Must have been stuck at a red light, 'cause I wasn't putting make up on. I'm pleased you got a giggle - Lindsay