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Discovery

~ embers cascade from precipices high, revealing paradise lost ~ _____________________________ For Rick's Contest: Nature's Monoku

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/9/2011 12:28:00 PM

Congratulations on a well deserved win in Rick Parise's "Nature Monoku" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2011 8:11:00 PM

wow, I love how you said it. Loving all the winners! Congratulations, Carrie.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/5/2011 1:41:00 PM

Excellent monoku, Carrie. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/4/2011 5:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this creative work..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/4/2011 10:49:00 AM

There you go gal! I'm proud of you, always an open understanding soul and one with the moral spine to stand up for a friend VERY special quaities [to be nurtured and appreciated!] Congrad's on your big win! Light & Love

Emma Mantle

Date: 6/4/2011 1:32:00 AM

Fell in love with this one Carrie. Congrats on a well deserved win. Best wishes as always Em :)

Sidney Beck

Date: 6/3/2011 10:46:00 PM

lovely words Carrie.....wasn't the photo absolutely gorgeous? This place is actually one of my fav places on earth....used to live close by....best wishes and congratulations...Syd

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/3/2011 8:25:00 PM

Congrats Carrie on your super win with this creative entry for Rick ..well done..

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 6/1/2011 6:44:00 PM

sometimes the fragile beauty and stillness of it all is too beautiful and would be shattered with the "weight of words" as you so poetically put it, Carrie. Did not know this contest was happnin'. I wish you the very best in it. Thank you for your thoughtful comment

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/1/2011 6:17:00 PM

now now, a haiku in a single line...is this a haiku pretty one? Thanks for liking my slippery mind ;) quite a yarn aye? Light & Love

Kash Poet

Date: 6/1/2011 1:31:00 AM

Excellent Monoku!!

Skat A

Date: 6/1/2011 12:25:00 AM

great monoku carrie