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Disconcerted Hourglass

Caress the aching tears of 'morrows it rains in regret's remembrances, sustained of sand-like grit 'tween frothy mimsy and mayhem endeavoring to rise above the fray within prayer's favor mid escaped disconcertion of seeping hourglass sand, weeping 'neath copious cloudbursts

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/19/2016 11:04:00 AM
We stand there, counting grains as they fall, hoping they are constant but realizing that there will be that last one, the final speck of life that fall through the narrow opening that is us and that is all there will be. Not sure if I got that right, but that is what I found here. An amazing piece of art Paloma
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Paloma P
Date: 10/19/2016 3:21:00 PM
What a poetic response, thanks very much Chris. You got it, also about acceptance. :)
Date: 10/19/2016 8:40:00 AM
We are suspended between the two as the sand of our lives shifts beneath our feet. This piece encourages contemplation.
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Date: 10/19/2016 8:45:00 AM
Good to know Richard, that's what poetry should do. :) Thanks very much.
Date: 10/19/2016 7:36:00 AM
A very deep poem Paloma..Indeed it is.
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Paloma P
Date: 10/19/2016 8:03:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by Charmaine, much appreciated. :)
Date: 10/19/2016 6:21:00 AM
deeply composed, paloma... we must allow grief to run its course before acceptance happens... huggs
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Date: 10/19/2016 6:34:00 AM
No doubt, grief has a different perception for each of us, thanks for your thoughts Nette.
Date: 10/19/2016 5:59:00 AM
Beauty in splashes from ruffled mind ... the images are nice ...
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Date: 10/19/2016 6:30:00 AM
How poetic Probir, a ruffled mind indeed, thank you....
Date: 10/19/2016 5:29:00 AM
Lovely poem Paloma, you have a REAL way with words! /|\
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Date: 10/19/2016 5:36:00 AM
You're too kind, thanks Rick.