Discombobulation

The sun was just above the horizon. 
I thought, is the star rising or setting? 
I’ll just lie here awhile; keep an eye on 
It to see which way the fire is heading. 
It’s strange, I know I’m lying in my bed 
But I don’t remember retiring. 
Am I asleep and dreaming this instead? 
This dreadful state is mind boggling. 
It’s like being awake in a nightmare 
And all that I see is not what it seems 
To be. I know one thing for sure, I’m scared. 
Egad! I hope I’m not dead in this dream. 
I looked again at the sun. It was rising! 
It’s morn! I can hear the robins singing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Leccese Avatar
June 12, 2009 at 12:28 PM
There is one word in this sonnet that just sticks out at me. "Egad!" I love this! I haven't heard that word in a while. Great job. Nate
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