Disco

Dazzling china
Moon bowl
Spilling
Shimmering, silver bubbles
Across blue ocean sky
Beneath which
Feathered fish
And flowers with fins
Dance under the
Disco ball

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Barbara Peckham

Date: 8/18/2021 7:19:00 AM

Yes, a long time ago, but memories are still happy ones of those days.

Mohamed Omar

Date: 8/18/2021 12:48:00 AM

Once upon a time in a disco.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/14/2021 11:27:00 AM

Nice images, Barbara. I still love the disco ball and times when we would dance wee into the night under the sparkles. Brought by wonderful memories.

Barbara Peckham
Date: 8/14/2021 6:58:00 PM

So happy you liked it! I remember those days fondly also!