Disciple

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A disciple put's 
       His attributes'
Into action and
    His thing's
Into a power 
          - Of -
      Commission
           But, 
A missing disciple,
A plain man before God,
Persistently turn's to a life
                  Of omission
       And turn's things'
            To and fro

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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August 18, 2011 at 11:00 PM
wow! Gary, i see you have more poems on here than i do... I love your concept here....Linda
Wesley Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 9:05 PM
A thoughtful verse on omission. Something we all do.
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