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Disaster In the Waters.

I look out to the waters, And this is what I see. A blanket made of darkness, Draped across your body. Death extending its fingers from shore to shore. Creatures that once dwelled deep within your heart, Are being plucked up by each wave. Being placed upon your brow, For all the world to see. The scares upon your face, bring much empathy. Your blood was spilled, And death was certain. Oh what a tragedy!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/13/2010 9:17:00 PM
Deat Christie wonderful poem I just posted one on the same theme ... well done its the poets job to write it ;) love Jayne thanks for the comment on my poem much appreciated
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Date: 6/13/2010 1:22:00 PM
the more i read it, the deeper it gets. good write. thanks, chuck
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Date: 6/13/2010 1:22:00 PM
A worldly tragedy Christie.. hope it will subside soon and the poor creatures already destroyed from it... very good write.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"...
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Date: 6/13/2010 1:08:00 PM
a tragedy it surely was, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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